Reviews for DROWNING ON DRY LAND
lolipopasha chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Awwww...this is so cute ! You hould turn it into a longer story !
ncistony97 chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
great fic. maybe go into more detail about what the characters are feeling.
phuong1317 chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Great story they are really like their character from the show they r cute together
simbagirl chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Oh my. You really should write more about April and Alex. This was great.
Sally Tomato chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Loved it!
Conn8d chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
I'm not really ever a fan of the whole 'high school' au genre for anything. But this could be a sort of exception: I will say that I think you did an excellent job with the characterization of both Alex and April, in a convincing way. They sounded like authentically younger versions of themselves, which doesn't usually happen for characters in this kind of story. So, while you may not have sold me on the concept, your characterization is perfection. Well done.
vanillaXtwilight chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
OH. MY. GOSH.

This was beyond perfect! I was kind of skeptical at first just by the description but you made every doubt go away within the first couple sentences. The only negative thing I could say about this is that it's not long enough ;) Can't wait to read more from you in the future!
KMontt chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
I like your story. I think its very well written and in need of a second chapter, Id say. Only this time, from Alexs point of view.

Thank you for writing this.