Reviews for Deviating
Guest chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
*please excuse any typos as I'm on my phone! last comment I meant "I like" not "think."

Mike was a joke and so she dodged a bullet. the incident with the thumb wrestling guys, wow. Jake and Tyler need to chill, but then again it's understandable. hope you explore that dynamic more.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
Her mother sounds like a lot of work. Poor Bella :/ I think her relationship with Bree and liked the imagery you conveyed throughout the scene in the park. well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Muffin and pumpkin could not be more gross in the "sweet" factor, heh. I doubt you'll come back to this but ima read on anyway.
Shante17 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I can't wait to see this develop I have a feeling that it's gonna hit deep.