Reviews for Sick and Twisted Affair
Guest chapter 11 . 11/1/2014
Dude..or miss? this story is really good it reminds me one of the episode from Criminal Minds about a victim being kidnapped, but soon develops feelings for her kidnapper even though he physically hurts her.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/20/2014
please don't hear the comment on frigid bitches who are jealous of your art and popularity, please make them regret ever talking to you like that by posting more chapters, prove them that you're stronger than their hurtful words, that they means nothing to you, that WE, your readers who loves you means more than a little group of little frustrated twats.

awesome chapter by the way and can barely wait to see the next one, it will break my heart if you don't post anymore...mine, and several others...because, are we not important to you too? or just the hurtful comments matters?

please think about it and give that afthole and her little group a lesson by posting more and more, and if this site is giving you troubles (like is doing it to most of my friends), go somewhere else, the internet is a vast place and this stupid site is not the only one that works to post literature.

looking forward to reading you more and again.
ThunderPups chapter 11 . 10/13/2014
Please update soon! I absolutely love this story!
medgirl98 chapter 11 . 9/23/2014
I love how you manage to make the story somehow believable (I don't really get why, but it does seem that way) and still terrifying at the same time. Miko definitely doesn't develop into a Mary Sue character (I see wayyy too many of those), which I totally love. I can see Miko's internal conflict so clearly even though you don't really go on and on about it, which is great. I hope you continue writing this story - it is amazing! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
Please don't give up hope fight your way into writing more stories again for there are people who would really like to read more of your stories.
Prowlin' Beast chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Well, for one, it reads alright, but it's very much like a bunch of talking heads.

But I think the thing that gets me most? Is how you have a millennia-old Alien Robot Warlord shrinking himself down to rape a 15 year old child. I'd say that just about hist the squick-meter good enough to warrant a report.

You are violating TOS by submitting sexually graphic content (that contains children in a sexual context) and you are bastardizing Canon (Megatron isn't a freaking child-rapist). If you're a "professional" writer (or just play one on TV), perhaps you should select a different venue than FFDotNet (where kids as young as 13 read) to write about the abusive, rape-based relationship and its associated psychological trauma visited upon a high-school kid.

Don't you have better things to do than peddling pornography to children, and "sexxing up" the rape element?

For those who have suffered the kinda trauma (psychological, abusive, rape based) you present here, there is nothing about it that has the appeal you give it, even in the first chapter alone. PROTIP: I don't care to hear if you were "almost raped" or whatever; that would only make you a worse example of a hominid, for writing this.

We all know Miko's an adrenaline junkie, but you've taken that and warped it into something demented. You should feel ashamed of yourself, and if you don't, your parents certainly should.

Better yet...and I suggest this to all you special snowflakes that write this filth and think your sh*t doesn't stink. Read this in its full context in the presence of your family and social circles, and be sure to include the details on who and what the characters are. If you aren't willing to do so, then why on earth would you submit it for the free consumption of children? What is wrong with your mind?

Oh, yeah, that nameless, faceless PRAISE that you sensitive and gifted beings feed off of. Because "OMG More!" means so much in a make-believe world whereas you actually have to put forth effort (and your own creativity rather than "borrow Canon") to garner praise.

So...as you vie to become a "professional writer"...will you wear the title of "peddler of child pornography to children" with the same pride?
KittyKatt25 chapter 11 . 9/18/2014
Oh please write the next chapter soon. I hope Mike makes it in the end.
Verelan chapter 2 . 9/11/2014
wow! this story i ... I dont know what to say! just amazing!
NightHeart chapter 11 . 9/2/2014
More plz, make it so megatron becomes good or at least caring of miko
Xilonax Shiverflame chapter 11 . 8/28/2014
Moar!

If only to see this excellent fic and miko get... Techno-Organified. new word.
Nightshade chapter 11 . 8/25/2014
Please update soon! Pretty pleeeeeeeeesssssseeeee!
elsafrozenqueen chapter 2 . 7/29/2014
I really feel sorry for Miko. No person should ever go through that in real life. Was she still a virgin before Megatron had his way with her because that must have caused an amount of pain for her considering Megatron's spike is made out of metal and Miko is really probably tight if you know what I mean. Too bad we didnt see much on how Miko is dealing with her first sex expierence with Megatron. For a Warlord who hates the human race, he sure knows where and how to pleasure them. And yeah Megatron inside Miko's room alone is not creepy at all. :O
SpiritOfMetal chapter 11 . 7/28/2014
Wow.

I am so relieved that Megatron is not actually like that in the show, but at the same time, this seems believable. Terrifying, and gives me the chills. I would like to believe that maybe an ounce of goodness still resides in that cybertronian tyrant, but I digress...

You touched on many taboo subjects, but you did so maturely and with great care. I can tell you really did your research. Some may argue that these subjects should never been written, but I believe these subjects need to be brought to attention.

Miko's character is outstanding. I feel we see more of her personality in this then the series. I really appreciate her more, and I wish I could hug her and tell her how strong she truly is, as corny as that sounds, haha.

I also commend you for touching briefly on Orion's and Megatron's past relationship, I don't see much of that around here.

Your story has stirred some inspiration in me to crack open the 'ol laptop and see if I can whip up some good Transformer tales. This is a well written fic, and it is a great one. I look forward to the next chapter.

Oh, and congrats on your BA AND trying to keep a good story(s) rolling. That takes a lot of time and dedication.
elsafrozenqueen chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Ok why didnt I discover this story sooner? This MikoxMegatron pairing is unique and you manage to pull it off really well. Megatron appears more creepy and stalkerish than the TV show in this story(which im not complaining). Wonder what he is going to do with poor Miko.
Mist chapter 11 . 7/16/2014
This is a might art. You should continue
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