Reviews for Chapters of Our Lives Together
Guest chapter 29 . 7/28/2012
I love this story so much! Jack and Martha have to be the best ever Bay couple. I like how Olivia likes Jack. I would love like a follow-up story if that isn't too much to ask, like Martha,Jack and Olivia are living peacefully but then bang someone gets out of prison if you know what I mean, in the show Martha picked up little trainers and I think a baby boy Holden would be adorable :) Keep writing this though!
Guest chapter 28 . 7/25/2012
I love Jack and Martha. One of the best Bay couples ever in my opinion as Ruby and Romeo and Indi triangle is just annoying now. I love this story so much!.
Keep writing this story, I will cry if you don't :(
Also love how you ended it, there is parts where i'm just awwwing like with Olivia being a Daddy's girl.

I just wish this could of happened in H&A on tv, Jack and Martha living together happily for once with a daughter, a son and more.
Carly chapter 20 . 6/12/2012
Awesome story! Really loved jack and martha... Your writing is awesome- looking forward to more! X
Rachie chapter 20 . 6/12/2012
Loving this story and where it is heading.

Great to read about Jack and Martha, one of my all time favourites.

Thank you!
StephBraxtonCullenBlack2000 chapter 10 . 4/28/2012
Great. Can't wait for more. If there is?
StephBraxtonCullenBlack2000 chapter 2 . 4/24/2012

I absolutly love your story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next.