As much as I love the tension the ending wasn’t really satisfying for me. It ended so abrupty with no really proper ending. It just left me hanging with a conclusion that ‘that was it.’ It seems the ending was just the beginning for them. I’ve also never rooted for an OC as much as I am with Lia. I enjoyed the story but only the final chapter left me disappointed.

I should have read the ending first before going on with this fic.. as much as it's stated complete I don't feel complete

I find it kind of odd that you spend much more time developing a relationship with a weird OC than the relationship ship you say you’re writing the story for. You could probably have included that in the tags or whatever bc that is likely to disappoint readers

Awesome story. Loved it.

Awesome loved it

i'm loving it so far i'm not sure who i'm more in love with Lia, Tori or Jade

I am late to the party on this one but no way should stop writing long stories. This was fucking awesome I loved the OC's and the pacing and it was nice to read something with a little more meat to again.

This has always been one of my favorite jori fics. I've re-read it multiple times. So, so good.

Oh my word that was fantastically wonderful! Like wonderfully amazing and fulfilling and real and enthralling and just right.

Thank you thank you thank you!

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omg. could you do an epilogue or somethin? just a short "where they are now" type of thing. that'd be chill

I stumbled upon your fic in ao3 because I go thru fics with the highest amount of kudos. It doesn't deserve the 72 kudos...I personally think it should've gotten MORE. I loved your original character and I totally ship TorixLia. If you ever feel like writing it, I'd be so on board for that. I need a Lia in my life tbh.

Fantastic story! Kept me reading the entire day! LOVED IT !

Oh my god. I was insanely emotionally involved in this fic. Bravo!

Bravo.

Well this has to be one of the best darn fics i have EVER read! in this fandom and out! Its so well written! I love Jori and i really didnt think it was possible for me to fall any more in love with it than i was but clearly i was wrong :)

So it might be that the best thing about this fic is just how much the tension builds and what a sence of relief comes with those final okays. Like, I have a physical reaction in my chest when reading this story, I feel like I can actually, literally feel all the anguish and stomach-knots and tension that Tori is feeling and then it just...it's just PERFECT. That's really all you need to know. It's a pity the show ended, because maybe if it had gone on longer, the you and the handful of other talented writers would have churned out a few more masterpieces.

Pretty sure this will always be my number 1 Jori though. You are fantastic!