Reviews for Duel
jake chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
it's good but it should be longer and switch off from ike to mist pov
Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
I think it turned out ok too I love battle scenes, and this one wasnt bad! You seem to be a pretty good writer. Hope to see more from ya! D
Sentury chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
I liked this! And I think you did the action scenes perfectly. I also loved the way you described Aether. A great scene to write a one-shot about and you did it wonderfully. Great writing and keep it up.