|Reviews for Abigail's Journal|
| SineadJones chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
I can't imagine you getting a very high grade on this, i'm presuming this was for creative writing? There's a lot of continuity errors and not much descriptive language and I don't imagine Abigail to express herself this way, if this is for year 10 or 11 work then very poor. I'm sorry.
| Sarah chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
This piece is okay.
I can't image you recieved an A, however.
You did not adopt Abigail's persona so well, and the language that Miller uses as these characters of the 1640's, is not at all present.
However the ideas, the denial of Abigail, is believable.
Work on spacing out your work so that it is easier to read on this website.
| Goth Albino Angel chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Hmm, a mix of Crucible theme and modern language. I liked it and it portrayed Abigail's feelings pretty well, in my opinion. It sounded like something she would write, accusing Elizabeth of wanting to take revenge on her and showing that she was uncertain that John actually did love her. That's really good.