|Reviews for The Truth|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Really ,just my opinion. I love allen.
| StoryMaker1504 chapter 5 . 5/22/2013
i really like this story!
| abritishbrew chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
Personality: determined, happy, rarely cries
An exorcist of the Black Order
History: abandoned by her family
Innocence's Power: music
Innocence Location: found in London near Big Ben
| Mya Kiryu chapter 41 . 3/22/2013
get you lazy ass up and update
| xXYuseiXAkikoXx chapter 41 . 10/20/2012
me and kaoru are like ninja moving in the shadow! xDD and allen got bitten so i'm keeping my distance _
| ThatOneFatGuy chapter 2 . 10/14/2012
Character's Name: Alphasta T. Card
Personality:Easy Going but is Serious when he needs to be.
Black Order or the Noah's: Black Order.
Rival: Skin Bolic.
History: Alphasta or "Al" as most call him was born with dark brown hair which he keeps short no longer than shoulder length and pale green eyes, white of skin with some burn scars around his neck and upper torso, he is just under 6ft. tall and weighs around 150-170 lbs.
When Al was was separated from his family during a vacation to Beijing when he was twelve years old, He would then spend the next eight years living on the streets of Beijing just barely scraping by.
When Al was seventeen he had activated his innocence for the first time during a street fight with some people he thought were human, After barely getting away from the akuma he had realized that his hands were different in that they looked similar to Mixed Martial Arts fighter gloves, he then continued for another two years developing his skills fighting humans in any street brawl and akuma when they found him resulting in a fighting style all his own which was kinda like a mix of street fighting and any number of martial arts he witnessed others use and then tried to use himself.
When Al turned nineteen he was recruited into the order by Kanda Yuu
after being hilariously outmatched in a brawl that Al started while trying to pick his pocket which resulted in both of them activating their innocence and fighting some more until a larger person named Marie stopped them both.
Al doesn't like to talk about his past much or how he got the burn scars that cover most of his upper body and will quickly change the subject if possible.
Innocence's Power: He named his innocence 拳庞德尔 which translates to "Fist Pounders"
Innocence's Location: Found in Beijing near Tian'anmen Square.
I dunno if this story is finished or if you are even doing the character thing anymore but i just started reading this today and i friggin love it so i hope you are still going and that Al would be part of it some day XP KEEP IT UP ITS AWESOME!
| xXYuseiXAkikoXx chapter 40 . 10/13/2012
ahhh i love my fast reflex and i can see the rivalry between them great chapter and update soon! :DD
| SmexyYuuWantsToKillRedHotLavi chapter 38 . 10/9/2012
Loving the KarouxLavi moments! :D
| xXYuseiXAkikoXx chapter 39 . 10/7/2012
thanks and fun mission with allen at vampire castle eyy! awesome xDD
| xXYuseiXAkikoXx chapter 38 . 10/1/2012
awww more cute moments but so sad there will be fighting again... man i wish this peacefulness stay forever! :))
awesome chapter and can't wait for the next one
| xXYuseiXAkikoXx chapter 37 . 9/25/2012
i love this chapte a lot and yes you did portray her way more than very well it's perfect! i enjoys reading all of the couple's moment *cough*KandaxNatsumi*cough* update soonn again! xDDD
| xXYuseiXAkikoXx chapter 36 . 9/19/2012
thank you so much! my character is exactly the way i see her when you introduce her! update again soon and yes i'm a fan of yusei
| DarkFlame Alchemist chapter 36 . 9/19/2012
Ooh, that explains why I didn't know who she was haha Another good chapter and happy birthday to you! :D
| DarkFlame Alchemist chapter 35 . 9/15/2012
Either it's because I'm tired right now, don't really know or just forgot, I'm not sure who this mysterious girl could be haha Maybe I'll be face-palming while reading the next chapter... Anywayz, looking forward to what happens next! :)))
| DarkFlame Alchemist chapter 34 . 9/15/2012
So Kai has mind reading powers; wondering what kind of innocence he has to harbor such an ability. Now I shall go on to the next chapter! xD