|Reviews for Beautiful Raven|
| Amu4ever chapter 3 . 2/25
Hihi...things are getting unexpected for Harry :)
Can't wait 'till he learns to love the meaning of the malfoys as his mates :)
Oh and if Draco and his father are mates too...then do they do something with each other? I mean they are father and son after all...?
| Mukuro234 chapter 21 . 2/3
Hehe this is such an awesome fic love it
| EProspit chapter 21 . 2/2
Awwwww! Beautiful ending! :DDDD
You should write a book!
| PiptheSnake chapter 14 . 11/21/2013
And... Now I wanna cry
| daithi4377 chapter 3 . 11/14/2013
Wow now how's that for coming out of left field. Lol to funny poor Harry
| horsesrules chapter 21 . 11/13/2013
its a good story
| Anon chapter 7 . 10/31/2013
I'm sorry, but I just can't read any further. I like your idea a lot. This could be a fantastic story. But you rush the plot. It's much too fast. There's no build up, no development. Also, Harry's character isn't developed enough, he's too shallow. Finally, I think you'd benefit from a beta reader. The poor English grammar made it difficult for me to read and enjoy it. The idea is great, but sadly, the execution makes it too difficult to enjoy. I'm sorry, I'm just trying to be honest so you can improve.
| Kitty Savella chapter 21 . 10/27/2013
This story was pretty good. A little too fast paced for me, but not really poorly written. Plot was good, characterization was believable. I think you could have taken more time to flesh out characters and describe situations and help the readers invest more in the story. I would have liked to see more about the Tom Riddle thing, maybe the actual proposal there, how the school took Harry's pregnancy, etc.
| nekobabe4ever chapter 21 . 8/9/2013
Beutiful story very well written :)
| Living-In-Bliss chapter 21 . 8/7/2013
Awwwwwwwwww, i'm squealing with joy over here. How can you write such a fluffy gorgeous fic! It's perfect ahhah :D Thank you so much for writing it :D
| charm13insomnia chapter 21 . 7/5/2013
awww so sweet nice fic
| Drarry Lover chapter 21 . 5/31/2013
Wow, that's quite a fluffy story. I like that Harry had a snake as a 'mother'. Glad Dumbles got what he deserved. Nicely written. Check out my Drarry fluff at this site.
| bluekitnaru chapter 3 . 5/18/2013
| Calemirneth Evans Potter chapter 21 . 5/6/2013
I wonder why they are so afraid if telling Severus?
| rmiser1994 chapter 21 . 4/19/2013
These Veela related stories are always so sweet!
Also in one of the previous chapters - Harry's note: I'm sorry I'm not good enough
I was in tears!
I really Loved this story! XD