Reviews for Desire
MyLifeInLyrix chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Wow...Mako you really are a hot ass fuck-up XD
krizzaaaa chapter 2 . 8/22/2012
you should totally have one where korra catches him
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Will you please write one from Korra's pov? I really liked it.
fictiongirl212 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
These two chapters are really good! Maybe, since Makorra is now canon, you could write a chapter where mako is having one of his fantasy's about korra(they are a couple in this chapter) and korra walks in and his fantasy come true!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
could you write some more please?
Leopardfang of Moonclan chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
Mako is now obsessed.
anonymous chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
are u mr Lundeberg?
LoriLori267 chapter 2 . 6/8/2012
AMAZING!
Elizabeth chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
I agree with "Yout candle on the water"'s suggestion for a third chapter!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
I agree with "Yout candle on the water"'s suggestion for a third chapter! These are really good!
SweettFace chapter 2 . 5/17/2012
Wowzers. He really liked her. hahaha
Dragga12 chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
Really good :3
Your Candle on the Water chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
There should be a chapter where Korra catches him (and helps him out)...

HOT! ;D
ChaChaFinesse chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
Fantastic!
Serena Scarlet chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
He's just a tad bit OOC with his sudden obsession, but rather than that I like it :3
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