|Reviews for The Blonde Ashikabi|
| ijonk chapter 5 . 7/6
I stop read at drama on ch 5
Seriously.. Naruto is within his right to his secret
And you make drama by akitsu suddenly run
My opinion: UNGRATEFULL BITCH. HE IS HER ASHIKABI! WHOM SAVE HER WHEN NOBODY WANT HER! AND SHE FUCKING RUN FOR LITTLE OUTBURST?! I SAY LET KARASUBA KILL THAT BITCH. WHY YOU MAKE NARUTO THE ONE AT FAULT? EVEN MIYA IN THIS STORY IS TSUNDERE OLD HAG HYPOCRITE
| DanteNaru chapter 10 . 10/1/2015
| Dkadarkness chapter 10 . 8/12/2015
| Black wraith81 chapter 10 . 12/31/2014
whoo...this is good stuff!..i dare say that it's up there with "unwavering sky"...great work man!,...keep on updating whenever possible
| Dreaming of the Phoenix chapter 10 . 11/23/2014
So far it's been interesting. I do hope you'll pick it up again sometime soon, this story has promise.
| Dreaming of the Phoenix chapter 9 . 11/23/2014
plural for leaf is leaves. I know it's something of an annoyance what with words like "leaving" having nothing to do with a leaf (though that would be where the bad joke comes from, make like a tree and leaf). So the phrase "swirl of leafs" should actually be "swirl of leaves".
| Ashcoort the dragon elder chapter 10 . 7/22/2014
i really hope you dont adabon this story cause its too much fun to read and hope you update pretty soon although you prob wont even read this since its about 2 years since you updated so i guess this story is sadly abadoned because otherwise you are a real dick if you cant even leave an update about why
| Madgormley chapter 10 . 7/20/2014
please continue great story
| Biblio388 chapter 8 . 4/16/2014
Got to enjoy the reactions he gets from everyone around him. Good chapter.
| Biblio388 chapter 4 . 4/16/2014
Is kind of amusing to read about an "Americanized" Naruto. Not something I see very often, if at all.
| Biblio388 chapter 2 . 4/16/2014
Enjoying the humor and like the direction it is going. Ok grammar and funny to read as I said.
| mxdgray chapter 10 . 12/14/2013
| Cloud Ex-SOLDIER chapter 10 . 11/19/2013
I believe you're the one of the very few writers in this specific genre to have Naruto have sex with his Sekirei, even if it was a means to an end. The vast majority of other stories I've read usually have Naruto dancing around theissue or even revealing his ninja abilities for that matter. It's refreshing to read a Sekirei crossover where he cuts loose a bit.
I look forward to the next chapter.
| priceless22 chapter 10 . 10/15/2013
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 9 . 8/8/2013
Do you plan on continuing?