|Reviews for The Blonde Ashikabi|
| mxdgray chapter 10 . 12/14/2013
| Cloud Ex-SOLDIER chapter 10 . 11/19/2013
I believe you're the one of the very few writers in this specific genre to have Naruto have sex with his Sekirei, even if it was a means to an end. The vast majority of other stories I've read usually have Naruto dancing around theissue or even revealing his ninja abilities for that matter. It's refreshing to read a Sekirei crossover where he cuts loose a bit.
I look forward to the next chapter.
| priceless22 chapter 10 . 10/15/2013
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 9 . 8/8/2013
Do you plan on continuing?
| Blazerblade chapter 10 . 7/26/2013
| Gwala5000 soon to be blazer fox chapter 10 . 7/16/2013
okay i get how naruto can get sekirei and plz for the luv of god make karabusa his sekire also miya cuz it won't get in the way of karabusa wanting her wish to fight masubi (did i spell tha write) and seriously miya needs to get laid really bad and like so many of ure loyal fans waiting for uzume's winging. and plz don't abandon such a good story becuz ure one of the extremly rare author who make an actualy good n/s xover than people can read properly and like author of the ninth sekirei pillar one of the rare times i actualy read a fic with minato on it cuz when that guys in i completly quit the story so keep up the goodwork and i would add you to my favourite by i forgot my login code so until i fix that out keeping going bro.
| Sillent chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
Huh. Uzume seems...different. Some type of America infatuation and a lack of normal behavior.
She spoke, like, once though, so it'll probably show up along with extended dialogue from her.
| 55 chapter 10 . 6/1/2013
continualo por favor de veras tengo curisidad que va a pasar a minaka
| KuroKanashimi chapter 4 . 5/14/2013
MINATO A BITCH WHO DOESN'T DO SHIT! YOU HAVE THE ALL POWERFUL NARUTO! IF I WAS NARUTO I WOULD BE PISSED SOMEONE LIKE MINATO IS GETTING WAY MORE SEKIREI THEN ME
| Luke Dragneel chapter 4 . 5/13/2013
question: what happened to the Nine-Tailed Fox?
| Luke Dragneel chapter 2 . 5/13/2013
My question would be this: how the heck could he fail a physical test with how ripped a shinobi looks, I can see him pulling of as a clumsy if average level of strength human.
Also, along the lines of which Sekirei Naruto should get versus what ones Minato keeps these are my suggestions for you:
Minato- Tsukiumi, Musubi, Kusano, and Homura
Naruto- Matsu, Kazehana, Akitsu, Uzume, Yahan, Taki, and Haihane with Kazehana and Akitsu being the most prominent of the group. After All, Naruto has a natural affinity for Wind based Chakra and also Naruto would see Akitsu as a female Haku from her attitude on what she is so Naruto would have a blind spot of sorts for her.
| Luke Dragneel chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I like that you actually explained it and also the fact that you made it where Naruto isn't at the Greenhorn stage of life that a lot of people seem to want to put him(or other characters like him, like Harry Potter) at when they do the hop.
I myself prefer a Naruto that knows his way around Fuinjutsu at least to the point where he can place storage seals on himself(after all, that is what the Jinchuuriki seal amounts to when simplified down, it is a storage seal for a living being of chakra) so that he can keep his belongings safe on himself such as scrolls of jutsus, Chakra training exercises, pranking ideas, other storage scrolls for clothes and weapons,stuff that anyone who wishes for their stuff to be safe without the worry of leaving it behind. That level of paranoia is usually what I put in my unintentional dimensional hoppers (such as if Harry was to make a last stand, I would have him wearing a necklace with a detachable shrunken trunk that had all his worldly possessions, mainly the entire Black and Potter library and wealth along with heirlooms, after all the Potters are an old pureblood line due to their ancestral line being linked with the Perevells with the Cloak of Invisibility being the proof of it. I would have had him collect it before his sixth year or after Dumbles is dead.) so that they are always ready in case they need to go somewhere, so as to lessen the amount of damage that is done to their physical possessions. It also helps that it normally keeps their enemies from pin pointing where their source of knowledge is at without it looking like someone of a higher power was actively helping said character out for reasons either unknown or that would make only a feeble reasoning.
the only problem I see in this is that if Naruto already did this to his own dimension, wouldn't that just keep happening over and over again?
| Qzh chapter 10 . 5/13/2013
really like the story.
hope this gets continued.
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 10 . 4/22/2013
Abandoned, writers block, hiatus, or computer/data trouble?
| simple405 chapter 10 . 3/28/2013
This is still an interesting story please update. I can sort of empathise with you on a limited level. My family is temporarily split and a family member recently died. I hope things get better for you in the future. Good luck.