Reviews for Awkward Realizations
Lilith King chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Where the NC-17 sequel? I want it so bad! Please! Nice story btw ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
That was perfect. The dialogue matched the show script very effectively.
yaoi lover chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Sequel please and thank you :D
LaSuen chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Loved it. That was very well-written and fun to read. Please write a sequel :)
FourthRider chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
YES. First of all, I loved this, and second, there is NOT ENOUGH Abed/Troy out there. PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL! NC-17 sounds about right, heh heh. ;) but yes, please, totally.
Faelwen Slashbringer chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Haha, that was funny! I'm glad that there are more Tory/Abed fics. I've read them all and the only new community fics seem to be Annie/Jeff and the occasional Troy/Britta. (

I loved the story, but you may want to work on your dialogue tags. For example, you wrote:

"'She's okay, right,' Abed stated.

'Yeah, no, she's fine. She's just helping Shirley with her paper,' Troy expressed."

The word 'stated' and 'expressed' pop out too much and distract from the dialogue. If you want to display emotions more then dialogue, you could say:

"'She's okay, right?' Abed asked earnestly.

'Yeah, no, he's fine.' Troy said quickly, reassuring his friend."

Just a thought. )

I'm looking forward to more Troy/Abed!

Thank you!