Reviews for Little Maid
Ana.is.Grell chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Hey her name is like mine.
Littlecosma001 chapter 6 . 10/8/2012
Please write something soon!
CielLeBlanc chapter 6 . 9/7/2012
I'll honesty tell you, your story seems very rushed and concepts are jumbled all over the place. Detains and plot structure is the most important thing to a story. Ciel is ooc at times and Ciel and Anne's relationship is wayyyyyyy to rushed. Not sure how old they are at this point either. Always take time to properly plan before jumping into a story.
CourtneyDeath chapter 6 . 8/2/2012
Alright awesome!
AKnifeInMyLover chapter 4 . 7/17/2012
how is ciel winking if one eye is covered by the eyepatch.
he could just be blinking.. i still like the story though
VampireSiren chapter 5 . 6/14/2012
...way to go, Sebastian. :( She officially hates you...
VampireSiren chapter 2 . 6/14/2012
My, how LOVELY...!¡
VampireSiren chapter 2 . 6/14/2012
My, how LOVELY...!¡
Mave Marie chapter 3 . 6/13/2012
... things happen FAST... just... dammmnnn O.O
Mave Marie chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
3 MONTHS LATER? dammmnnn...
Mave Marie chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Oh my god I've been waiting/ reading insanely fast to get to this review. The reviews not really on the chapter [{(but I just wanted to make sure there wasn't anything big to review about the chapter)}] the review is about the summary. Now i typically don't read summary's because people always butcher them and makes me want to turn away from the story at hand. So normally I just see how long it is or how many reviews there are -*I'm like really getting off topic right now*- but what caught my eye was the "Elizabeth was murdered" and I broke out laughing so hard my laptop fell on the floor and kinda broke. So I had to steal my mothers and now I finally found your story and I read the first chapter just so I could tell you how much I enjoyed the summary. I'm gonna really read the rest of it now.

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BleckBlah5956 chapter 5 . 5/1/2012
love this update soon... i would hate my father too if he did what Sebby did
dolorousity chapter 5 . 4/29/2012
I'M SORRY BUT THIS... Sebastian and Ciel are WAAAAY too caring. In the chapter which you show Ciel's flashback of where Lizzy dies, how old are they? I think it's illegal to get married until they're like 16. And Ciel would never agree to get married so soon. ._. And he's too caring in that also .
BleckBlah5956 chapter 4 . 4/28/2012
wow.. what kind of father doesn't want to know if his daughter is alive or dead... love this update soon please
dolorousity chapter 4 . 4/23/2012
Yes, please do try to get Ciel more into character... He's WAY too caring. And yes, they just met and they're lovers... CIEL'S ACTING LIKE A PEDO AND IT'S FRIKKEN CREEPY D: I do like this otherwise... Sebastian's also a bit weird. .
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