Reviews for A Simple Comment
MoonlightSalsa chapter 3 . 1/23/2017
I'm dying
LuminousMoonRay chapter 2 . 4/13/2016
Nice. Nice...! XD
LuminousMoonRay chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Ppffft! Ah-hahaha! XD she's like every parent out there when 'The Talk' comes up! XD loved it!
(I also expected some random voice to tell Magnus to stop flirting! XD)
Sherlock's 2nd Blogger chapter 3 . 3/7/2015
Heh. What Magnus did to Pit is exactly the sort of prank my friends would pull on me. Except I'm not quite as clueless as Pit.
Anyway, this was pretty amusing. Good job! :)
BlazeingEcho chapter 3 . 10/10/2013
Hehe. Oh innocent pit...
9.0 playa chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
palutena you damn b****
9.0 playa chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
da fuk did i just read?!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
OrangeSky chapter 3 . 5/4/2012
lmao Palutena is a pimp. Can't blame her though, Pit looks so cute in his outfit... ;) Please update! This has to be the funniest one I've read thus far. :D
Guest chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
Damn Centurions had to ruin all the fun by telling him :(
EviIPaladin chapter 2 . 4/24/2012
As much as I loved the first chapter, I feel like this is kind of pressing it.

"Easy in bed" was a cute little innuendo. Flat out "slutty" just feels... Dirty, for lack of a better word.

But that's really just my opinion. Writing style is fine so it is just me not caring for the material.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/23/2012
Can't wait to hear Medusa's reaction to Pit's potty mouth
Heliotropium chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Best Kid Icarus fic on this site yet
n00dl3gal chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This is hilarious. I actually think Magnus would say this. Bravo!
EviIPaladin chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Pit should totally prove to Magnus he isn't easy in bed.


Well, someone is going to draw it sooner or later...
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