|Reviews for Hero|
| 11SnowLeopard11 chapter 1 . 4/20
Argh, note to self: if I ever come back to read this, don't read the second chapter.
Aside from that, I really liked the first chapter.
| guardianofdragonlore chapter 2 . 4/16
Oh my god. I think I'm about to cry.
| BloodyBel chapter 2 . 4/3
Your fanfic all make me cry.. So much angst... T.T
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/22
Liondancer17, why u got to be so good at sad Fics?! I almost screamed, "ALFRED F. JONES, DONT YOU DARE!" Ecccellent work.
| Red-Phonix14 chapter 2 . 2/3
It's surprising what words can do to a person...
| Seele Esser Deutsch chapter 2 . 9/28/2014
This was depressing but it was perfect. Everything displayed so well. that real sense of complete denial.
| Seele Esser Deutsch chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
This is good. Me likey
| tenaciousToxophilite chapter 2 . 9/12/2014
Oh my god
ALFRED MY BABY DONT YOU DIE ON ME DAMMIT
*sobs quietly in corner*
| Dark Meow Meow Kitten of Doom chapter 2 . 5/11/2014
MY GOD THIS CHAPTER WAS EVEN WORSE BUT IN A GOOD WAY
;; Y U DO DIS TO ME
Y U GOTTA BE SO GOOD AT SADFICS
| Dark Meow Meow Kitten of Doom chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
OH GOD THE FEELS
;; Y U DO DIS
| Zeivira chapter 2 . 4/19/2014
So... damn... sad... I love how you picture their relationship. I can't help but imagine that America's personality in canon is just an act, as well Italy's and Prussia's (Among others), I mean, after all they have been through they can't be so happy and carefree, they just have too much past resting in their shoulders.
The "What if" version was stunningly beautiful too, love both of them.
(Sorry for bad English, I'm not a native English speaker)
| RaisinContradiction chapter 2 . 2/12/2014
Was hissing and screeching.
Damn i think i'm unintentionally using my death glare..
FOR LANDS SAKES PEOPLE WHY DO YOU WAIT UNTIL SOMEHTING HAPPENS!
I CAN"T FIND ANYTHING THAT CAN EXpress my anger.
no...i'm just empty now just.
no matter what people say THEY ARE REAL!
THEY FEEL ADN LIVE LIKE US
LOOK AT HIM SUFFER SO THEY BETTER SHUT HEIR WHORISH AAASJBSNFIUEBFONV MOUTH ABOUT IT. mmyeeeeeeeh
| Fallen Angel 1243 chapter 2 . 12/22/2013
This was one of the saddest and greatest things I've read. It would be cool if you did a third chapter of the other countries thoughts on what they had done to America. This was awesome though!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
How about an extension of both?
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Please write an extension of the first chapter, the one where America doesn't die.
There aren't very many angsty suicidal!America fanfictions out there, (at least ones that go in depth and don't make America look like a blubbering asshole. Please, please, PLEASE, write an extension/sequal/whatever to the first chapter. It would be nice to see how America's attempt affects the rest of the countries. (At least the allies and axis).
I think your writing style is amazing, and this story could have potential.