Reviews for Nobodies Remembered
Guest chapter 16 . 2/3/2014
I ship it!
Guest chapter 14 . 12/23/2013
I just choked on my tongue
Vermillion Serpent chapter 14 . 11/18/2013
Ugh i should have known it would be him! I just hope they can get his 'army' back to normal with nothing bad happening! Too bad there's only 2 chapters left though :( oh well! Still enjoying this all the same! Keep on writing! Xx
Haxisal-XIII chapter 12 . 11/9/2013
Hm, wonder why I never got an email about this update...

Haxisal: Finally I reappear! But evil and mind controlled...stupid Marluxia, next time we fight on my turf! And I'm not sure whether to be touched or freaked out at the whole 'flower bed' thing...

Zoxey: You're cruel to all of us Hawk for putting us through this!
Vermillion Serpent chapter 12 . 9/28/2013
You're getting good at writing action scenes, it'll be interesting to see where this story is headed. The big bad trio (as they now seem to be) seem to be quite elusive.. they seem to appear, attack and then disappear a lot... hmm. Hard to work this one out.
Vermillion Serpent chapter 11 . 5/26/2013
Good luck in your exams hun! I'm really interested in seeing how this ends, so don't be sorry that there are more chapters!
Woooo Xasech! XD And 'See you at the end' is a great line... Inspiring even..
Anyway, this is looking interesting, so when all of your exams are over hopefully I can look forward to more work from you :D
Keep on writing, and good luck for those exams :) xx
Kirkysaurus chapter 10 . 4/21/2013
... Intriguing...


Not in this canon they're not. Now shut up!

I liked this. Me want more information the plot, though. Update soon, I'll give you cookies. Or a Key to the City.
Kirkysaurus chapter 9 . 4/21/2013

Xylarsk: That's it? That's all you have to say for taking so long to read it!?

... shut up! ;o;
Vermillion Serpent chapter 10 . 3/19/2013
But we still don't know what's going on! DX Need to know! Please! XD Powerful Cai is powerful, this is pretty interesting :D
Vermillion Serpent chapter 9 . 1/25/2013
Something tells me that boy with silver hair was Jack Frost... am I right?
Heh from what you said before though, I can't wait for the next couple of chapters!
Keep on writing!
Vermillion Serpent chapter 8 . 11/27/2012
Haha you should have had them meet up with Jim or Morph! XD Or BEN! XDXD Before he gets his memory back, I bet Marluxia would have loved him haha.
If they're narrowing down where the missing members could be I wonder if we'll find out as readers where they are soon? Hehe keep on writing!
Moo-cakes chapter 8 . 11/23/2012
Nice job, dear..
Kirkysaurus chapter 7 . 11/8/2012
Oh dear god, Sazh... or however his name is spellt...

Xirama is so fun I'd love to spend a day with her, as long as it wasn't during my monthly depressive week... And yay, the creepy 'ssssssss'-er is dead! I think! I think lyre is also an acceptable term for those kinds of harps, atleast in the Zelda Universe they are.

Navix: But you said a ha-

YES, AND MULTIPLE THINGS HAVE MULTIPLE NAMES. So stop complaining. Be happy you don't get what my OD OCs will be getting if they break the fourth wall.

This was pretty fast by the way, considering it's you Mr. Allways-busy-with-so-many-stories'-planning. I'm impressed. Also, don't understand the parody reference (I don't play any FF games), so you'll have to explain that to me later.

Update soon. Hopefully the gang that went to Sundrop. Hint hint, wink wink.
Vermillion Serpent chapter 7 . 11/6/2012
I totally want to go to this world XD First glimpse of this 'Soul' is very interesting though, it's going to be intriguing to find out what's going on with him. :)
Keep on writing, I will definitely keep on reading!
Haxisal-XIII chapter 6 . 11/2/2012
Haxisal: So we've gone missing?
Zoxey: Again?
Nexdrak: are you two here?!
Zoxey: Puh-lease, we're always in this section, no matter what has happened to us.
Nexdrak: Interesting...
Me: Zoxey, don't say anything that you'll regret...
Zoxey: What? Like the fact in the story my current location is-
Me: *whacks her around the head with a book*
Zoxey: OW!
Me: Stop ruining the story! Sheesh, I preferred you when you were crueler. You didn't give me hassle.
Zoxey: *mumbling incoherently*
Nexdrak: O-k...So, Haxisal, you know about what I was saying las-
Haxisal: No, Nexdrak. Look, can you two cupids give me a break. I'm too young for any of the members...
Zoxey: Age doesn't matter!
Me: Oh dear, here we go again...Anyway, glad to see you update this! This was a really interesting chapter, but as always funny like usual, Xemnas should have thought about it before taking on thirty something members, or are we in the forties now? I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

And on the Halloween thing, it was cool, but no described in too much graphic detail, which is great, sure I love the graphic stuff, but there comes a point where it's just too much. For such a short piece of writing it was really quite effective, and it was cool that the chants were ' From the depths of the beyond, I summon thee.' and 'kill the intruders.' backwards. Nice touch. It's hard for me to imagine my OCs as zombies...*shudders*
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