Reviews for Mishmash
Rabunga chapter 6 . 2/13
I would love if you ended up making this a story because you are right, who doesn't love how awesome Neville became and what he could do if he got the chance to fix things! If I had any writing skill at all I'd ask if I can use this as a jumping off point but I'd be afraid of messing up such a good premise!

Love your work!
twistedhalfsmileM chapter 5 . 11/30/2015
I like this idea very much, but I do have one complaint. I really dislike it when authors feel the need to rename Harry. Granted 'Harry' isn't a proper Pureblood name suitable for a Black, but wouldn't 'Hadrian' do? Hadrian Perseus Black sounds very Pureblood, also his initials would be the same as Harry Potter Black, which he is in many fics where he inherits the Black Lordship from Sirius after OotP (then proceeds to super his way through the rest of the fic, pulling rank all the way). Just saying. Thanks for writing!
Love and Sugar Quills,
teedub chapter 6 . 7/1/2015
Gah! I want more of this story, especially the criticism of Neville's family. They so deserve it.
teedub chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
LOL, this was quite funny and entertaining. I totally support the morally flexible attitude and slothful lifestyle. Ginny/Riddle is also hilarious.
Blitzstrahl chapter 6 . 4/2/2015
Should have kicked her to the curb disowned and all that.
NefariousPlots chapter 6 . 1/2/2014
Neville's family really did have it coming. Love this idea!
HPMARIE chapter 6 . 11/2/2013
Wow, I really liked all these pot bunnies :) Especially the last one, please consider finishing one of them? *puppy eyes*
Neloska chapter 6 . 2/6/2013
Totally loved the story, am a sucker for time-travel and always love to see a new idea. Especially with such an awesome start. I also love how you characterized Neville, determined and strong but still compassioinate and simply too nice for his own good...
I really wish you would continue this one.
Barranca chapter 6 . 10/6/2012
What quirky, entertaining snippets of improbable circumstances! Time travel rocks, and none of us would be able to exactly relive our lives, only changing a single point if it happened to us. This is why it's always so interesting to read a well written time travel story. Plus, Harry raised dark? It was always a possibility hanging in the air, even with the canon Harry trying to walk the narrow path.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/25/2012
yeah, neville had a shitty hand served for childhood :(
Guest chapter 6 . 9/25/2012
this one was so cool
Guest chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
I really liked this idea!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
I can't deny it's interesting, but there is only so much you can do with this that doesn't rehash other "Harry goes dark" stories.

Although political schemes and such are interesting to read, a good part of the appeal to Harry Potter was the emotional side of it, so you would have to do very polished characterizations on everyone else to contrast and compare with Harry's emotional distance, plus work harder than normal on pacing and plot.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
But what happened to the real Ginny? :(
Vixen Uchiha chapter 6 . 5/31/2012
Yes they do, I hope you do more with this one and the traveler one those two I like the best.
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