Reviews for Lasting no Longer
Kazen chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
Who died?
Was it Yuan? Mithos? Kratos' brother or close friend?
I really liked it though.
I also liked the open end, even if it raises more questions.
Hope to read more from you.
orangepotato chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Wow! Wonderful description! I loved how everything became disjointed in the end, and how beautifully the entire scene was portrayed.

But who was it that died? Apparently Kratos' brother... head canon for you, perhaps? It's very interesting, none the less. I'd love to see what events transpired to bring about this conclusion. Is there another story in the future?

A great short read.

I look forward to reading more from you,