Reviews for The Untouchable
angellyx13 chapter 12 . 9/17/2016
Please update this story soon. I've really enjoyed it so far.
Ana chapter 12 . 2/14/2015
I hope you mack another I really this Chloe and Alek thing.
You are doing awesome.
Pleas mack another!
Ana chapter 9 . 2/14/2015
I'm so sorry, that is so mean who would do that?
Just so you know I really like your story's
Guest chapter 12 . 12/18/2014
Are you going to finish this story at all?
Guest chapter 11 . 10/13/2014
Please finish it's frustrating to see all your stories end like this with cliff hangers. I'f you decide to I would love for you to email me and let me know so I can contenue reading.
RoseSilver999 chapter 9 . 8/27/2013
But... your story is great! ! I love it! Don't listen to that farthead! ( sorry my little sisters comebacks are getting to me)
Beautiful Evil chapter 11 . 8/5/2013
This is a great story and I hope to be able to read future chapters. I also read the review that someone sent you that you posted and that's terrible, even though it could use some work I can always easily figure out what you mean to say or what wrod is missing (so don't listen to those kinds of messages!).
Guest chapter 9 . 6/27/2013
DAMN Ok so there were some grammar issues but that comment wasn't necessary. Like seriously your aren't a perfect patch of peaches so chill the fuck out!
moniqe chapter 10 . 12/26/2012
I lovvvvve your story it's great
ultimate beach lover chapter 10 . 11/12/2012
I really love this story! The concept is cool and it's so cute how much alek cares about Chloe! Don't get caught up in all the hate because you are too awesome for it! Please update soon!
kaitlyn99 chapter 10 . 11/7/2012
freaking loved it!
iWant9Lives2Live chapter 10 . 11/6/2012
SyfyGeek13 chapter 10 . 11/6/2012
I can't wait for their date! Hope you update soon (:
ilwtnlock chapter 9 . 10/30/2012
That was a really mean message nobodys perfect and if someone has a problem with that the they can just stop reading this awesome story, don't let one person ruin your day or story. Fanfiction is about writing wonderful stories and having fun. If you ask me I really enjoy reading this story, so keep writing and tell the haters to jump of a building. ;) hope you write more

Jesse Swanson's Girl 2.0 chapter 9 . 10/22/2012
keep writing!
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