|Reviews for Ceres: Finding the Wolf|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/10
Are you almost done with the next one? I'm getting antsy for the next one.
| PROFILEISTERMINATEDDEAD chapter 5 . 4/24/2012
I did think you did a great job adding dialogue. It was...easier to read. Do you think you could do a quick recap of sorts to remind people who is on who's side, and what's happened so far? I think that if you did that, well first of all I wouldn't be quite so lost, and second, it'd just be helpful, and possibly give you some new ways in which to direct the plot. I find that if I do recaps I get more ideas.
| PROFILEISTERMINATEDDEAD chapter 4 . 4/23/2012
I'm sorry, but ya lost me. I have like, no idea what's happening. A bit of constructive criticism : Less dialogue, more detail.
You'll have happier reviewers and a longer story.
| PROFILEISTERMINATEDDEAD chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I didn't understand everything you wrote, but I'm sure you'll explain in time. You've got me interested.