|Reviews for Shining Force: Modern Darkness|
| Maximus Aureillus chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
I see a summary. I see a premise. And I have read enough to see what this story was going to develop into, a cliched fangirl fantasy. What a waste of time.
Do future readers a favor. Take this story down.
| Martin III chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Even though they're a rarity, it always puzzles me when I see a "fic" which is no more than an announcement of "There will be a story in this space sometime in the near future." It is hard to imagine someone thinking this would do anything more than annoy readers and cast doubts on the author's ability to produce anything of substance. Indeed, it is rare that an actual chapter ever appears for such fics. Apparently some folks think fanfic authors get a lot of attention (I wish!) and want to get it without actually writing anything.
Another problem is that this particular announcement reads like a promotional piece for a heavily cliched J-RPG. It wouldn't surprise me to learn that the author had copied the whole thing from a RPG's official website and just changed the names.