|Reviews for Black Diamond|
| Guest chapter 55 . 3/3
We'll I am glad to see that we were of the same mind when it came to Jacob. Jackson, big bubba, it's all the same. All good!
Wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed your story! Thank you for being the wonderful writer that you are and sharing your creativity with us the readers. This story was so great. I cried, I laughed, I cheered and a couple of times I tilted my head to the side and said huh?! But mostly I just couldn't get enough. My hubs will be glad I'm done with it. I have neglected the house completely. Who wants to do Landry or dishes when they can read this? What he doesn't know is that you have a profile page with more where this came from. Muahahahaha! I intend to take full advantage! I think this is the first ski/wineward I have read about and is now one of my all time favorite stories. You have positively set the bar with this Edward. No real man could ever live up to the character you've created. You stated in one of your AN's that you wanted an Edward like in your story. I have been married for a long time and love my husband very much, but in response to your statement...don't we all honey. Don't we all!
| Guest chapter 50 . 3/3
Ok. Things are back on track for these two. I have had something in my brain for a while now and even though I know the story is finished at this point, I feel the need to express something because my brain won't shut up. Maybe you have written this in future chapters but I think it would be awesome if the three girls had a triple wedding. They are all engaged and they are best friends and they are marrying brothers. The Napa vineyards in your story are all a close knit community and one of their own getting married is newsworthy. Especially since Bella is involved and they all rallied around to find her before. It could be a huge celebration at the vineyard and there would be plenty of space and beautiful views by which to hold the ceremony and reception. Also Edward got a marriage license already for what purpose I'm not sure. But I'm wondering if he is planning on throwing her a surprise wedding. Don't know what you have planned but I just thought that was a really cool idea since the girls all met the guys in the same week at the same place. Anyway, I can't express how nice it has been for there to be 55 chapters to this story because I have really enjoyed this long ride. I hope you also address the jake thing a little but in the epilogue because it makes me nervous that he will get out eventually. Also I know he is in jail but I really wanted there to be a point in the story where Bella was able to confront him in a safe and secure place. I thought maybe you would write a little about his trial so we could see him have to deal with being thwarted by these two and them happily married while he rots away in a cell. Or maybe since you have already written in the death of a character, I think jake should meet with an untimely death via big bubba inmate and a shive. You know some of those guys in jail have issues with men beating up on women even if the are criminals. They love their mamas and don't tolerate violence towards the girls. Jake should have one of those types as a cell mate! IJS!
Onward to the next chapter. Just had to get that off my chest.
| Guest chapter 38 . 3/2
Oh yeah... RPatz in black leather! Yummier than rhubarb cheesecake any day!
So here is my plea... I can't take the suspense/pressure whatever over Jacob and what he is going to do to Bella or Edward. I keep waiting for him to make his move. Either cornering her somewhere when she is out running around town, forcing her into a car and kidnapping her or even worse is my fear that he is waiting for the right moment to run through the gate at Rose's house and then he can sneak into the house and be waiting for her. I am also worried he will do something bad to Edward either on the road or that he will just plain shoot one of them. I don't know what the deal with Tanya and Jake together is. I haven't figured out the connection with them. Anyway, I am sitting here on pins and needles just waiting for something bad to happen when I don't want anything to. I trust you will make it all work out but damn the waiting and wondering is killing me. Have mercy!
| Guest chapter 37 . 3/2
I liked this EPOV. There was different info and parts of the story in it that we're different than in BPOV. I am really enjoying the story but if I'm honest (and I think you want that in your reviews), I don't like the EPOV's when they are just basically a rehash with a few changed sentences. I tend to quick scan and just skip over the whole chapter so I can get to new stuff. But I do scan for new info so like in this chapter when I find it I slow down and read. So yeah this EPOV was good.
| Guest chapter 31 . 3/2
I can't type right now or say much because I am to busy crying! Damn it! He better come after her and ask her to marry him , IJS.
| Guest chapter 28 . 3/1
Oh I am laughing so hard right now. I would love for Jacob to be threatened with the material E has on him if he represents Tanya against him. But uh oh T may spill the beans to jake about B's location. Oh what a tangled web! It's getting good up in here! LOL!
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/1
Well now I know why there are 55 chappies in this bad boy! There is still so much story left. You would have had a great one if you had resolved the jake thing in Tahoe and just had these two go off on their happy way. But no... You have continued to take this story into more detailed circumstances and are letting us go forward with these two and their friends and family. Taking this story from great to phenomenal. So many relationship threads to take care of. Simply can't get enough of this story and have nice plot bunnies for some sweet dreams starring our fav vintner as well. I love this Edward. He's like the perfect man.
I have to say, I can be a snarky bitch and I have a real problem with our trio of villains in this story. They are making for a great one, but I can't wait for them to all get theirs in a big way. I know that you can't be violent on FF, but I was thinking some type of industrial accident for Leah, cause no one gets to hurt Edward like that and get away with it. as for jake, castration sounds good. Oh wait.. I guess that would be pretty violent. oh I know how about he gets arrested and sentenced to many years in prison and becomes the good "friend" of a very large prison lifer named Roco against his will. Did I mention I really hate this jake. And tanya... We'll if you could make her lose all her money and get disowned from her family because she failed to steal the secret recipe, and therefore has to get a job cleaning shower stalls and toilets at a local truck stop well that would be just peachy. Guess now would be a good time to tell you not only can I be a bitch but I can be a creative one! Off to go read more of your story cause it's so good and we'll..I'm addicted! Toothless until next time!
| Vampfan1 chapter 21 . 3/1
Ok while I know this deal sounds like a good one,bellA just agreed to work for hale etc law firm after she grads law school. She and E were already wondering how they would work out the distance b/c of their jobs. So this plan seems a bit short sighted unless hale etc branches out to winery country. They both need to be living on the family compound. Other than that, I'm loving yes I said loving the story. I just hope there is no more pain/violence to Bella from jake and that he gets what's coming to him big time! Damn it, you are the author... It's your job to RUIN him! Side not... Sorry for crappy typing, I'm currently walking on my treadmill. It's a bit bumpy!
| Andrea chapter 33 . 2/17
KESELLLL BELLA LEBAY BANGETTTT Why cant she just be an adult and accept his apology instead of being an emo dammit!
| Andrea chapter 31 . 2/17
I'm a little put off by Bella here. I think she's very insecure since Jacob left her and took it all out on Edward. She overreacted
| Guest chapter 31 . 2/1
I think Bella is pretty much just an idiot.
| Guest chapter 40 . 1/16
And just thinking if Bella reported Jacob when he assaulted her and went after her with a knife this shit wouldn't happen. He would be in jail. She had witnesses for fucks sake. Talking about stupidity.
| Guest chapter 32 . 1/16
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/15
This relationship didin't even started yet and it's already fucked up.
| thinkalotabouthim chapter 16 . 1/17