|Reviews for Marry In Haste Version 2|
| YepItsMe chapter 19 . 6/2/2012
You're back! :)
Well, Georgie was very sweet and welcoming, indeed, much like her brother. At least Darcy admits that he hopes she will love him. I mean, they both know they have feelings for each other, but so often it becomes the elephant in the room, due to societal restraints. In this case they have a need and a freedom to just talk about it honestly, yet without rushing into it, which I like.
The Earl really is a piece of filth. He's finding out who his friends are - or aren't - and I wonder who he'll find to be his second.
| biancaruth chapter 20 . 6/2/2012
And our two favourite villains meet!
| Marina83 chapter 18 . 6/1/2012
I'm so happy to see this story here. It's one of my favorites.
| spannieren chapter 19 . 5/28/2012
Beautifully written story so far - love it :)
| hrhdana chapter 19 . 5/26/2012
thankyou for all your fabulous work so far. i really enjoy each chapter, and admire your tireless work and imagination! i look forward to seeing elizabeth and the earl get what's owing to them, and seeing darcy be able to get closer to elizabeth!
| Jeune Circe chapter 19 . 5/25/2012
Oh ! I just find this excellent fic :)
I must confess I really did't intend on reading it (before getting to the first chapter, while I was checking what was new in ffnet) but... I started reading and couldn't stop until finished!
Ohhh my god! so beautiful written, so lovely! I loved Darcy! Oh, and Elizabeth, she's always been my favourite charater, and Darcy my dream man!
I love it! Perfect!
Ohhh that Lucius! I hate him! I wish Darcy could teach him a lesson! I wish Lizzie and Mr Darcy could live happily ever after!
Oh, I'm definetily returning for more! :D
| MrsPuddle chapter 19 . 5/25/2012
Dont worry, week is very short time (I had once one year between two chapters because my computer went down and I wasnt in the mood to rewrite it;)) I am looking forward to your next chapters;)
| TrippandFall chapter 18 . 5/23/2012
This story is wonderful. I came upon the first one and fell completely in love. I look forward to every Saturday when I get to read more. Darcy is the perfect charecter and you do a great job portraying him. Keep it up!
| Maclaney chapter 18 . 5/22/2012
The quality of writing in Version 2 is much better than in Version 1. The writing is tighter; the transitions are smoother; and the chapters, in general, seem more complete, more fleshed out, as it were. Both versions, however, are excellent stories, with excellent potential and possibility of being printing, based on the standards-and lack thereof-evidenced in the 1-200 already on the market, nearly all of which I have read.
Nevertheless, while the grammar and word selection are better than in the earlier version, errors still unfortunately abound and detract from the quality of the work, as well as jar the pleasure of the reader. Both versions are so well done as to merit improvements in these aspects.
Thank you for a wonderful, yet disturbing, story. Unfortunately, spousal abuse has been and continues to be a despicable facet of life for far too many. Ignoring such evils enables them to continue.
| Nuingarien chapter 18 . 5/21/2012
Yesss! She's escaped! What exactly is her relationship with Mr. Darcy now? Is she under his protection "just because" or is she his mistress...? (
| Lucy65 chapter 18 . 5/20/2012
I am so happy that she is now safe. That is a comfort to both of them as well. Please let someone poison the earl as soon as may be!
| Ivy2010 chapter 18 . 5/20/2012
What girl wouldnt want to be carried off to a bedroom by Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy lol. But seriously i read version 1 and i really liked it this one is really different and love it I cant wait to see what happens when the earl starts looking for lizzy
| MrsPuddle chapter 18 . 5/19/2012
I hope that Darcy just didnt ruin not only his and Lizzies reputation but also Georginas. It was so sweet and brave of him to risk everything for woman he loves.
P.S. Somebody should already kill Lucius. Preferably furious husband of one of his mistresses so Darcy wouldnt get in trouble ;) However, its your story so I will leave it to you )
| MrsPuddle chapter 17 . 5/19/2012
I really hope that Lucius dies and when he dies, it will be slow and painful. Ugh, I just want to punch him for his behaviour...maybe its good that he is just imaginary character in story, otherwise I would be in jail for murder )
| YepItsMe chapter 18 . 5/19/2012
I can see why Lizzy would be apprehensive about staying in the Mistress's chambers, and why some may think he's being self-serving. (I was a little surprised when he told his staff to treat her as the mistress of the house right away and wonder what Lizzy's reaction would've been to that, had she heard it.) I guess I just see it as his way of saying he loves her and he doesn't care what people think about it. People may find out and think she's his mistress regardless of what is (or isn't) happening in private and they both know that, but it's worth it. I think she knows that he would never force or persuade her into anything but I'm glad he reassured her that she doesn't need to repay him in that way.
Someone else mentioned making this version #3 of the story and, having not read the original version 2 myself, I am curious about the differences between that and this.