Reviews for Waiting
RadZO Madness chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Aww so sad :(
The.Dragonfly.Lover chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
This is so sad…the five years threw me a bit, but it was a good throw!
HinaLuvLuvChan chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This is so good and it made me cry...
fireeandicee chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Very good story. It's one of the only ones that I have read that has actually made me tear up. Great job!
WalksThisWay chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Story line is good but the grammar is most definitely not. Please pay particular attention to comma placement and sentence structure. Many of your sentences are too short; you use two or three sentences where one could have been used to better effect.

The pace of the story is nice with a good introduction, middle, and end.
walkingby521 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Very sad. But sweet. I somehow want Draco to be alive, even though I know he isn't. Sigh.
HeirofSomebodyImportant chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
I'm tearing up but it is a beautiful story :'3