HA! You get my ALF and Flash the sloth impressions here
There were really owls! Well, crap!
Wonderful story, especially with all the-uh- pet names. I especially liked Harpy and Tinkerbell. So why did Farmer Ted lure them in and turn over at least some of the Chrysali?

ROFLMBO OMG that was great! The whole "Suspicious Suspect" thing and the "They don't know that we know" thing had me laughing out loud. Truly an awesome story. So much like that show! You really nailed the characters perfectly! Beautiful job!

Wow...that was just like watching the television show! Wonderful job. I was so upset when it got cancelled, and then I found this...ya! It was very entertaining. Please continue writing. You are very, very talented!

Man, I'm impressed. You practically wrote a novel! Anyways, I LOVED this story! You caught the characters so well, it was full of action and amusing comebacks, and I loved your very own made-up people. Please, for the love of God, keep writing. There aren't enough writers like you out there.

HOWLS!

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Still howling...

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STILL HOWLING...

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Reduced to manic chortling, as child is in bed and mama does not wish to awaken him.

*snickersnort*

Oh god, the banter was spot on there. *shakes head* Awesome, awesome job, my friend. Why have I not read this earlier? *thwaps head in self-disgust*

I so can't believe there were actually frickin owls..

Oh, and the Monroe Maneuver? *snicker* So Chrysalis actually put one of Monroe's bits into their STC training course? Wicked...

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Krys, still snickering

Just loved this story. You have the Fawkes & Hobbes down to a T. Brilliant dialogue to go with a unique story. Write more, please!

Oh my freakin' god, that was hilarious! ::snort:: Like everything you write, another brilliant and funny masterpiece chock full of marvelous little details that add up to one kick-ass story. I am so jealous. ::sigh::
Favorite Parts: 1.) Eberts cross-checking the Boys' nicknames for the girls with their real names, and seguing into the Buffy/Willow discussion. 2.) The running gag of "we know that you that we know"... LOL! Love it!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! It's one of the closest fics I've read to being an actual episode. Thanks!

This story is simply terrific. You really caught the Hobbes/Fawkes style of banter, and the story is hysterical. I kept snickering and laughing out loud, while reading it. Congratulations on a great job of characterization, as well as humor. I'm already recommending this story to my friends. Loved it!

Oh my word, this was wondermous. Funny and serious and angsty and happy and a whole bunch of good stuff rolled up into one. I won't comment on the Jewish/Catholic thing, since it's already been mentioned and you explained yourself, etcetera. ;) I thought the language was a wee bit intense in some places, but that's just my personal opinion.

All in all, I would have to say that this was quite an enthralling piece of work. It had me hooked from beginning to end. The storyline was wonderfully complicated, yet at the same time pretty simple.

Umm... *tries to remember if she has something more to say* Okay, I guess that's about it, except for one more thing... Kudos! ;) *hands Helena a cherry coke*

Hi guys - glad you enjoyed the story.

Since a few people have commented on this, I thought I'd clarify: the story never said that Hobbes was Catholic - he just went to Catholic school for a week. (He mentions this in the first scene) His remark about his "lifelong relationship" with the Catholic church was meant to be facetious. I guess I was way too subtle in making that point. I originally included a line where Hobbes is offended that Darien forgot about his Judaism after the way he bitched about what the yarmulke he wore at Hobbes' funeral did to his hair, but I guess it got lost in editing .

As for Darien... I have to admit that this story was written long before "Possessed" was aired and I didn't think to change it after the fact - you caught me ;)

Sorry for chiming in, but I had to defend the honor of (at least some of) my research ;) Thanks again for your comments!

I really enjoyed this fic. You are a truly gifted writer. Your use of description ws great. I also like how you tied the story w/Crysalis.

Just one picky comment...Hobbes is Jewish, Darien was the one w/the Catholic school background. His background about this was discussed in the eppy "Possessed." Again, GREAT FIC, please write more (including more Claire).

P.S. Don't mind my comment about the religion miz-up. If I don't write in down, it would fester in my mind. LIZ :)

I haven't finished reading the story yet, but I will 'cuz I like what I see so far. I can totally see Hobbes saying "monktastic." :-D

But here's my nit-pick: as far as I can tell, Hobbes is Jewish. Probably always has been, so how or why would he ever have considered a "lifelong relationship" with the Catholic church? I'm not trying to slam you or anything, but I just think this is a little out of character. Sorry, just my two worthless cents.

roflol. that was great! :)

That was excellent! All the characters were pegged, the banter was great, the plot was great, everything was great! It felt like I was reading an actual Iman transcript. Definitely worth the long read!