|Reviews for A Marauder's Plan|
| Moonring chapter 1 . 3/13
Oh, and have I mentioned my favorite parts? I like to re-read them from time to time, even while I read the later chapters. I love the part where baby Harry takes over Lily for a little while, and I really like the part too, where the Heirs make their oaths to Harry. Those parts came out especially good and memorable. :)
| Moonring chapter 63 . 3/13
I've just finished reading your story, and I wanted to say that I love your take on the charachters. We see them strong, we see them forming new bond and we see them with their problems too. And their hearts ache isn't so big as would take away from their independent, strong charachters that we have come to know in JK's books. It's more like you give them the backbone and capabilities that JK's book have implied but never acted on it in the later books - which always did and always would leave me with the lack of fullness. I love how the charachters develop too. How Draco didn't jump into being a good boy with a wide smile and how Lucius still takes the changes in ranks and positions with a little lemon.
I love the politics, you show them enough in every sense: you write down the important parts and mention in passing the more dull days, so they will not slow down the story. I love the little nuisance too, like when Sirius observes how fast Wenlock sits down at the last Wizengamot session.
I am in love with the family magic, and have a feeling how the story will go. But you need to be careful in the future as much as you have been these last 63 chapters that family magic will not become an all-resolving tool. Please, be careful. It would be a shame hitting this good a story on it's head by a slip like that.
I hope and wish for you a fast and at last full recover for your elbow. Don't strain it! (And of course for selfish reasons I wish you many long hour-meets with your Muse.) Thanks for the story!
| jlcave chapter 63 . 3/12
I love your writing! Please continue
| Guest chapter 43 . 3/12
Harry just forgives ron? That is just unbelievable. They argue back and forth like two girls and harry is seriously turning into a wee pussy. He just goes along with what everyone says.. Its really getting annoying and its not believable for god sake! This is the same harry that went after the stone and went after ginny? I know your harry is different from canon but even the way you portrayed harry at the beginning of the story is completely different to this little coward
| Guest chapter 39 . 3/12
My god your harry is turning into a whimp! And such a whiner! He better win that damn dueling tournament!
| Guest chapter 35 . 3/10
This is taking a while to read...Grah.
Oh well, It's still awesome!
The inky thig is, I can't connect to the characters very well.
Their emotions are portrayed very nicely, and their goals known, but we readers cannot exactly connect to these kind of feelings you know? Not many have experienced the horrors of the world, or wanting to protect someone even at the cost of your life.
I believe that this fact contributes to the effect of the story.
| Peachesandmolybdenum chapter 63 . 3/10
I'm really enjoying this story! Hope to see an update soon!
| baronesspotter chapter 62 . 3/9
Wow, I love this story so much! Please, please continue this book. It's the best I've ever read, and I adore it!
| Guest chapter 63 . 3/9
such a wonderful fic. though I prefer no pairing for this kind of story,,,,
| Guest chapter 60 . 3/7
Wow. This is the best fanfiction i have ever read
| Update soon chapter 1 . 3/6
Did you die when you had surgery? Cause I've been waiting months for the update
| Harold Lloyd chapter 41 . 3/6
So, the Goblet's going to be on display then brought to Hogwarts. I hope someone's going to look inside it before they light it. That's how I'd get someone's name into it; put the name in before the defences are even applied.
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/6
oh god! it was such a good story untill chapter 15 when hermione comes in and ruins it! i hate her! its not like i have stuff against muggle borns but she just shouldnt be allowed to get involved with politics ! ugh! and thers nothing wrong with being smart, but she is always rubbing it in everyones faces and is so loud about it! ggggrrrrr
| baronesspotter chapter 3 . 3/6
I really like this story! It's way cool. I also like that they are in character, and are moving past their canon flaws, rather than you removing them from existence here in fanon. Sirius was rash, immature, and vengeful in the books, while Remus was timid, afraid to stand up for what was right, and ran from his emotions. I love seeing these men acknowledge their faults, and realizing that they must leave them behind for Harry's sake. You are an excellent writer.
| Guest chapter 43 . 3/2
I adore this story. The characters are dimensional and interesting. The plot is fantastic and it is beautifully written. The only character I particularily fond of is Ron and how quickly Harry forgives him. I understand Harry's character is very loving and treasures Ron's relationship, and very believable for Ron to have done what he did, but after revealing something so personal as common knowledge, why was there practically no anger or disappointment it Ron. Any person would feel outraged and even more wary of ever trusting someone that would blurt out their personal information due to undeserved rage. Again, I really enjoy the story, and the characters (including Ron) are very believable. I just think there should be consequences to Ron's actions.