|Reviews for A Marauder's Plan|
| ruby2360 chapter 63 . 2/20
I'm truly hooked up on your story...
| King bee396 chapter 63 . 2/18
Please keep writing
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 4 . 2/15
hmmm... messy... and I REALLY don't like this dropping the answers into their laps,s ure a note aobut the HOROCRUX but WHY IN GODS NAME WHY would he elt his death eaters GOSSIP? Luscius didn't know what he had, Belatrix knew it was important, sure Regulas probably KNEW it was important and had SOME idea but...
and considering how much crazy adventures the trio have gone on, I wouldent put them as... AVERAGE any of them really.
would have worked better with Regulas giving a note about how this is IMPORTANT... and I don't know fi ilik ehow much common knowledge its got to be about horocruxes when only TWO long time professors KNEW what was going on.
still fun stuff. conquering the worlds interesting but... fun stuff.
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 3 . 2/15
hmm a messy, messy position with the fall out, must have suckd for Dumbledore having all fothem dropping like flies afterword... and Dumbledore doesn't like to share crap does he?
I wonder hom much caution...Sirius WAS attempting murde a long, long tiem ago and Remus WAS involved, however unwillingly, Im guessing that througut the war witht he thoughts of spies and crap and Dumbledore had to be WONDERING... at east a little, and that the Sirius thing... well was Sirius alone in the whole mess?
classic showing of no talcking gets people killed.
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 2 . 2/15
remember this, there are FAR more houses than just the blacks, the weaslesys are purebloods and one of the only light ones actually STANDING and having children ALIVE
ROn and Nevil are PUREBLOOD on the "light side" and I imagine that some thigns to them are SENSATIVE in regards to blood and inscest and inheritences and magic and all SORTS of things... so I hope you handle that. especially with the fact that they haven't brought it UP. id LOVE if Harry or Hermione said something cursing out osme slytherin purebloods that would HUR Rona nd Nevil for a bit and...
..., Harry ISNT although id suspect any kids of his would COUNT... and IM assuming that things would go tricky if youd try and named an non black as heir without any blood rituals or other stuff when they ARNT black... that hopefully don't mix with the MESS of all of Harry and volde and proficy magic and... yeah
hope Sirus does the smart thing and actually TRIES to find a way to contact Dumbledoore with this information and DOESNT give this info to a teenager that COULDENT even if he TRIED keep the knowledge to himself,s eeing as one good ocomolus could hear his thoughts.. and Voldemort finding out EARLY through harry that is secrets are threatened and need new hiding places...
yikes. sorta surprised that Madam Black hasent MESSED with some stuff...
the wand bit was a nice touch, its nice to know that you REMEMBERED that. good job.
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 1 . 2/15
ok I love the observatiosn about Dubledore that might be REASONABLE and that everyone might have serious issues of contention over how to get things DONE.
I REALLY hope you bring up the whole Sirius tried to ACTIVLY kill and betray another student during his time at school and Dumbledore had already given his second chance thing...
but I REALLY hope you cover tha thtey are on the same side, and the fact that for so long (I m CURIOUS about what the hell adventures Dumbledore has gotten into besides Grinwald and Voldemort, who have to be among the biggest fighters and people of support cant be ALL, Dumbledore if my math isn't wrong lived through the two world wars, the cold war, and the post cold war.
So Volde and Grin being the BIGGEST and most memorable,b ut certainly not the ONLY one. wah twould hit have been like, magical countries actually FIGHTING each other? true the muggles moving to war doesn't mean that the wizards would to.. .but id doesn't meant hey WOULDENT.
SO I REALLY hope you showcase that Dumbledore has been a leader for a LONG, LONG time and that anyone whos been REMOTLY able to ... equal him/take his place have nearly all died. and that he really wanted Harrys head on straight, was worried aobut Volde MINDRAPING AND CONTROLLING HARRY so didn't want to stir anywaters with him... and plus blood magic, and what with at THIS POINT the durseles not probably going to pick a fight...
I REALLY hope you handle this well. it could be really INTRESTING if you do. disagreements don't mean ENIMIES and sometimes your going to be right aobut stuff, and wrong about other things. should be fun. I HOPE.
and hell, add in that the aurors probably were going to be FORCED to look at harry for sighns of Siruis showing up... which led to Umbrage having ACESS To harry... and sqrew with some schedule, sqrew with some paper work, and have a couple death eaters and then...
huh. well dam.
| LastManStanding616 chapter 18 . 2/15
I hope for you that the Lestranges came from a walloon family, or else!
But for the rest, it's a very decent story, and I hope it stays like this till the end.
| bandgsecurtiyaw chapter 63 . 2/15
Very good story so far cant wait for more.
| Guest chapter 63 . 2/15
a wonderful story... It would better without the pairings though. It's not that I despised the couples, but in this kind of story with the genre and the summary, no real pairing would be better, or only in passing if any. thank you.
| Guest chapter 63 . 2/14
Hey, I just wanted to say I've been devouring this story like nothing else over the past few days. You are an excellent writer of character and emotion, and I love the situations you have set up with the Potter-Black alliances and all the politics, and having bad guys that are actually sincerely creepy without crossing into Batman Villain territory.
I also really like the way you've handled the Hallows, it was very interesting and different to most fanfics I've read. I wouldn't mind exploring whether or not Harry has a similar connection with the sword of Gryffindor, or if it has any role to play in this story. Hey, I like swords. I'm sure there's a joke there.
I'm really looking forward to the next update, good luck with your elbow recovery!
| Guest chapter 63 . 2/13
This is one of the best stories I've ever read! While I was reading, I kept hoping you'd update before I got to this point! But here we are, and trust me, this story will stay in my bookmarks and I will continue to check and see if you've updated. This story is so well written, the plot is amazing, and I'm excited to see that comes next!
| Marty F chapter 63 . 2/12
are you ever going to update?
| Jedipilot24 chapter 12 . 2/12
An interesting description of the Werewolf Prank, would you mind if I borrowed some of the details for an L/J fic that I expect to start posting soon. I'd like to tweak it with a few of my own ideas, but a lot of the details would be more or less the same.
| mudbloodpotter05 chapter 18 . 2/10
This review here is because I can't review more than once a chapter...
Hope you are doing well.
Keep up the amazing work!
| StupidChinaBook chapter 38 . 2/9
I have a minor complaint about this chapter.
in the beginning the fake auror was called Hollins but later he was called Dawlish. Which is right?