Reviews for Afraid of the Dark
guest52 chapter 34 . 11/26/2013
poor chibi D:
garby3 chapter 40 . 7/23/2013
Congratulations. You made a very appealing villain with a good past. And I must say this: I love you so much for using Kamo and Abe in this! They are great, even if they don't have a real part in the game. But certainly one could make a spin-off series with the Tao Troopers!
The only thing I didn't like was that Ammy didn't seem to care about Chibi like she should. Either wolves are cruel like that, or she really is that bad at parenting. I mean, I thought Chibi's bond was stronger with his friends than with his mother... I don't know.
I want to read more from your Okami fanfics in the future, please update the sequel to this!
Anyway, how exactly is Waka and Ammy's relationship defined? (talking about the game) Are they friends? Brothers in arms? Lovers? Is Ammy his pet? ... Or is Waka her pet? It is confusing, because their interactions at the final scenes are interesting, at least. But it doesn't help that she looks like a wolf the entire game. Or maybe she is not really a wolf? Whatever xD...
Phew! It's kind of tiring to write a review with my ps3's dualshock, but the story deserved it :)
Well, see you soon! Au revoir.
okmaifan chapter 9 . 1/30/2013
Wow, out of all the fanfiction I've read so far this is the best. It really draws you in. One word to decribe this. AMAZING.
Spirits and Shadows chapter 40 . 11/3/2012
NYUUUUUUUUUUUUUU EET'SH OVERRRRRRRRRRRRRR- *randomly pouts in corner*
Shiranui: ... *face/paw*
-*-*-*-*-*-
Is there gonna be a sequel? 'Cuz this story is sequel-worthy. So, sequel? Pwease? *puppy eyes*
Chibi: *glare* Puppy eyes are trademarked! *puppy eyes too adorable to see without completely losing your mind, but of course Spirit survived because she's already completely insane*
Meh. I've seen better. *bounces around and completely rips off Pinkie Pie*
Shiranui: ... What the heck, Spirit. *stares for a while* ... You have been watching way too much My Little Pony...
*starts singing the theme song*
Shiranui: OH GOD NO!
Ammy: FLEE! SAVE YOURSELVES!
Samickle: RUN, I WILL USE MY AWESOME POWERS TO SAVE YOU!
Shiranui: HOW THE F*** DID YOU GET HERE?
Samickle: I HAVE NO IDEA, DON'T QUESTION IT!
Chibi: *hums along*
Waka: *hums along to a completely different song*
Ammy: RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
Oki: *pulls out his Princess Luna action figure*
Lika: *yells at him for incorrectly calling it an action figure and tells him to call it a toy*
Waka: *breaks his arm and is unable to his mp3 player (he was very upset)*
Discord: THIS REVIEW IS TOO RANDOM!
Everyone else: *stops whatever they were doing and stares* ...
Discord... thinks this is too random?
Chibi: YOU ARE THE GOD OF RANDOMNESS, WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!
Discord: ... *pouts*
Yami: *sticks out his tongue* Nightmare Moon is better!
Samickle: Too many Bronies... Too many Bronies...
(AND THEN THE REVIEW GOT TOO RANDOM, SO SPIRIT CUT THE TAPE FOR A WHILE.)
*coughs and smacks lips awkwardly* ... Yeah.
It feels really weird not saying please post more for this story... (FAIL)
I'm gonna browse Avengers fanfiction for a while. Bye!

Subnote:

Shiranui: If you feel like you have not had enough randomness to keep you going for the next week or so, follow this link and watch the following video for ensured laughs: watch?v6TiXUF9xbTo Watch Joss Whedon (God of the Nerds, creator of the ever-awesome Avengers movie) fake support Romney. Believe me. You will love it.
Sakuragami chapter 40 . 11/2/2012
Aww, curtains closed... * stares at the epic title drop * I hope you'll keep writing Okami fics. I certainly loved this one! As if you couldn't tell already :)
Dogzii chapter 40 . 11/2/2012
/rollsoverallthespicnessinthi sstory

SERIOUSLY
I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH BRO :'D 33
EVERYTHING ABOUT IT
WAS SO INTENSE
SDREKWHGFTE
Shadow Amaterasu chapter 40 . 11/1/2012
I liked it. It was really good.
QueenOfDragons2 chapter 40 . 11/1/2012
Ah, a great ending to a great story. Glad that Kagu's okay. So THAT'S why you titled the story "Afraid of the Dark"! I kept wondering about that.

40 chapters! You definitely have more resolve than I do!

...I will admit, I was somewhat expecting a sort of "twist" ending in which it would turn out that Ammy is pregnant again, but oh well.
Daughter of Kabegami chapter 40 . 11/1/2012
Aww...still sad...I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT CHIBI AND KUROW! THEY HAVE A SPECIAL PLACE IN MY HEART! It would be so much happier if Chibi wasn't gone... *sobs* it...it's so...sad...yet...yet pretty...
Tormented Sufferer chapter 40 . 11/1/2012
...Wow...Nice! So sad that this story has ended :((.

And yes. I'm not using my usual "I'm looking forward to the next chapter!" cliché anymore. Yay!
divineretrebution chapter 40 . 11/1/2012
This was an amazing story, i really enjoyed it. I cant wait to see whats coming next!
Koneko chapter 39 . 10/30/2012
I guess it's time for me to write mine now, huh. Well I'm on hiatus, but when I get back could you maybe...? Also need to find the last one, where did it go...

Oh Ammy, reviving at the mention of food...
QueenOfDragons2 chapter 39 . 10/30/2012
Wow, for a moment there, I was worried. I wonder what the epilogue will contain...
LoverOfWhiteWolves chapter 39 . 10/30/2012
OMG I WAS CRYINGGGGGGGGG u made meh cry lol but this is really good man its aready over i love this story i really do it better be in favz omg did i FAV? huuuuuuuuuuuu im faving this.
Lucaura chapter 39 . 10/30/2012
Don't feel sad, feel happy inside! Finally, that jack*** Tero is dead! PARTY! WOOOO!
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