Reviews for Survival of the Fittest
RavenHunter155 chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
I love this, but when you said what if Daniel have ..you know to gas thing. He'll die in a bathroom when being chased with Amanda by Xavier? I gotta tell you, I'm a. The one and only Xavier/Amanda fan because I see the way he looks at her xD like what happens if he didn't kill her? I doubt it but I'll love to see moments in a story, didn't love but interest in her. If not then I'll aprecciate if you make another story between them :) I love Xaviers view
ZarcherPhoenix chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
I like how you described the situation. I especially like Xavier, he seems like a cold old man who hates life, but that just might be the thing that will allow him to survive (I think)
I found one mistake. "GET US OUT OF HER!" I think you meant "GET US OUT OF HERE!" Otherwise, it was very well-written.
Daniel Lamb chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
Very nice, I like this story so far. Interesting to see things from Xavier's perspective. Hope you plan on updating soon!