Reviews for Sophia's status in The Pack!
animaluvr123 chapter 10 . 2/12/2010
snowangl05 chapter 10 . 3/18/2005
Great update I cant wait to read more so please come back and update again ASAP!
Wicked and Wondrous chapter 10 . 9/4/2003
e that was so sweet man i never knew that the survival issues were so much in detail! well at least u bought out that point! is kewl! i really liked the shawn part it was very interesting cant wait 4 some more oh la la's
roswellachick chapter 10 . 9/1/2003
i like the shawn and sarah thing, i think u could have put alot more detail in and done so much more, may i suggest, when u get the chance, adding more detail in there because as much as i love s and l luv i think that s and s have a story to tell as well that u could take advantage of as a side story if u wish
treevamp chapter 10 . 8/30/2003
i like your new chapters liked the factor that you added Sean and Sarah, needs more Luke and Sophia action please cant wait for next chapters
cat chapter 7 . 6/6/2003
great more please and hurry bye
roswellachick chapter 6 . 6/4/2003
hey good 2 c ur back...ya know u don't need those quotation mark thingies:"normal human",'hill kids','flipped'

wow everythings comin 2gether 4 them, but i do wish u had added more detail & dialogue
isis chapter 6 . 5/31/2003
final ur back well thas chapter was great and please update soon thanks
whitewolf02 chapter 5 . 9/19/2002
what happens between Ruby and John please continue your story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!) PLEASE I'M NOT ABOVE BEGGING! SO I BEG YOU PLEASE UPDATE SOON!:)
SwordInKaos Destiny-Bound chapter 5 . 9/17/2002
so much blood shed.

I didn't mind tyler (creep), but Persely also? Ok, I know she was a bitch, but there's already so litle in the Pack... Oh well... their dead now.

Lisa chapter 5 . 9/13/2002
Please update soon. I want to know what happens between John and Ruby. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!PLEASE!
theroguepheonix chapter 5 . 9/8/2002
great story please continue
Lisa chapter 5 . 9/5/2002
Please updated! I want to know what happens next.
Jessica chapter 5 . 8/28/2002
I love this story. The only part that is semi disgusting is Persely getting killed. I don't like Tyler, but it is still sad that he had to be killed and didn't pay for what he did to Ruby and her father. Plus, he tried to kill John. He kinda deserves it though.

Your friend,

Jessica J.F.
Lisa chapter 5 . 8/6/2002
Good storyline. Keep up the good work. Please write some more.
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