|Reviews for Revelations of One Harry James Potter|
| Noble Korhedron chapter 15 . 1/26
Hmm, I'm not sure I believe they could've chosen when to die, but the rest was O.K. Including Hermione basically forcing the now-former Weasley twins out of Britain! I cracked up reading that! *EVIL GRIN*
| Noble Korhedron chapter 7 . 1/26
Please change this Ch. ASAP. CrazyDuck5280 has stopped posting, and I think it's unfair of you to recommend W.I.P's which haven't been updated in over a year.
| wendylee chapter 15 . 1/2
Thank you. I enjoyed your story, it was a nice take on Harry's perspective of how he was treated by the people in his life.
| HunterBerserkerWolf chapter 15 . 12/31/2013
Awesome story. The Feels man, the feels, they just overwhelm you.
| chris chapter 15 . 12/2/2013
i just finished the story,and the last author's note is a light from the fog showing people the way in a raging of the authors are just starting out i wonder did john grisham,anne mccafrey,start out out writing fanfiction,and if they did was it because of the praise they got for their stories that made them decide to write for a living?...now i am slightly envious of the people that have the talent and ambition to write great stories,i love to read them and wish that i could do so!.
I thank this author for writing a good story and for keeping me on the edge of my seat reading it,keep up the good work and here's a cookie,passes the author a very large moist chocalate chip cookie.
| Tirla chapter 15 . 11/27/2013
I enjoyed this story very much. thank you for writing it.
I have to say that I have been reading most of your stories and I have seen a definite improvement in writing style, so much so that I. Have to congratulate you for your hard work and dedication to writing in general!
I loved "Losing Control" and "Escape" and now, this story as well.
| continental-line chapter 15 . 11/2/2013
Good story, it's going on my favorites.
| continental-line chapter 14 . 11/2/2013
Is another love story starting here? That between Amelia and Filius.
| continental-line chapter 13 . 11/2/2013
It may take years but The-Four-Who-Failed should be able to return to a shadow of their past relationships. After all, they were teenagers when they made their mistakes and will be (hopefully) different people ten years later. If Harry dosn't grow up in that time, then his 'punishment' no longer fits the 'crime'.
| continental-line chapter 12 . 11/2/2013
Quite the session, I hope everything dosn't go hunky-dory. It would be too rapid a turn around for such a socially and politicly conservative body.
| continental-line chapter 9 . 11/1/2013
Snjff, sniff. Well Hermoine made some bad choices in this tale, at least she is not being passed around like a slut any more. But how would she ever be able to rebuild her life knowing what had happened to her? I guess that's another story (Hint! Hint!) A good story anyway. Question; if Hanna dosn't find her 'Prince Charming' will she take up Susan's offer and move in? With enough time and exposer Hanna might join the Potter family as a co-wife? Who knows, but it's fun to think about.
| SlythrInHermione chapter 15 . 10/27/2013
another lovely fic.. Seems hannah abbott in your stories doesn't know to keep her mouth shut lol .. Neville and susan seem to go either way .. I see from review,A/N, and your bio that raders have been flaming you.. No doubt they dislike the way hermione,weasleys and dumbledore are treated at times .. I'm glad you haven't let that crush your spirit and continue to write stories how you wish .. In the end it is for your enjoyment and we as readers read these to offer our thouhts.. Some individuals are just so narrowminded hey latch onto one character and refuse to see their faults and can't seem to comprehend these fiction stories are almost all AU .. Umfortunately I have come to realize the majority believe hermione can do no wrong and jump to defend her at every turn .. I can see how many females could feel preference to her being the main female character but despite her intelligence she has severe qualities that make her annoying to say the least.. But in he end readers that can't think outside the box and are stuck in canon world are not worth your frustration.. Write for you and to hell with the flamers.. I enjoyed this.. Thus far my favorites are hero and veela and megan jones/harry .. On to read the last of which is morag/harry! Keep up the good work I await your updates for the new susy harry rewrite
| fahad.tahir.50 chapter 15 . 10/20/2013
Just one question:
What if Harry broke during the psychological torture when he was a kid? Everything would have been doomed and it would have been James and Lily's fault.
Besides that, what kind of parent would willing subject their child to such abuse? They couldn't have known that Harry would stay sane after all the hardship.
The Hermione bashing...just wow (I'm a Hermione hater but just...wow)
Overall, this story can be summed up in one word, ridiculous.
A shame really, you nailed everything perfectly besides the actual plot.
| firebolthallow1572 chapter 13 . 10/9/2013
I think that you could of had Harry and Susan go back and teach DADA or even be there and help teach the wand making at Hogwarts.
| firebolthallow1572 chapter 10 . 10/9/2013
I wish didn't push Neville or Minerva out their for good. The reason Neville is that Harry and Neville have been great friends and Susan and Hannah been great friends. Also Minerva has always try to had Harry heart best interest. As you can I am for Susan, Harry, Neville, Minerva, Amelia together.