|Reviews for Coming Back|
| newsiefan chapter 4 . 7/19/2012
THANK YOU for writing this! Finally, some well-thought-out shippy fic for the two Alcatraz couples! (I am personally a bigger fan of Hauser/Lucy, but hey, Diego and Becca are wonderful too.)
Never bothered to review here before but today this touched me. Please continue!
| Lover of Reid chapter 4 . 6/28/2012
That was great. It's sad that Doc feels that he needs to withdraw himself from Rebecca. I wonder what Rebecca was dreaming that involved Doc being close enough to her to keep her warm? At least Lucy is there and can see and read the signs between the two of them, and can inform Rebecca on what she needs to do. I am still curious about what Uncle Ray might try to do to get the two of them together. I can't wait til you update again.
| Lover of Reid chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
That was great. I can't believe I am going to say this but I actually like Hauser's and Lucy's relationship. It makes me wish that they were that close in the show. The way that Rebecca reacts to Doc's actions are so cute; you can tell that she has the same feelings for him that he has for her. I can't wait to see how Ray is going to help the two of them see each other's true feelings for one another.
| farmgirl1964 chapter 4 . 6/23/2012
Very nice job! I'm really enjoying this. Please continue. You've done a super job of keeping them in character! Not easy for some. Thanks for sharing.
| Henna Gamgee chapter 4 . 6/21/2012
I'm so happy you updated! It seems like people are finally drifting away from this fandom, which is only to be expected with the show cancelled, but I really wanted everyone to linger some more! :P
What a sweet chapter. Doc is adorable! Now I really want them to get together! :P I sure hope you keep going with this.
| Casie01 chapter 4 . 6/19/2012
Another great chapter. I'm so glad to see a story updated. Sadly the updates to Alcatraz stories has slowed down. Thanks for keeping the show alive for all of us fans.
| Mackenzie chapter 3 . 5/26/2012
I love this! Keep going! Please! You're a really good writer and I love the plot! I'm so sad that the show got cancelled I'll have to remember it vicariously through you're story! Don't stop!
| EnumerateInfinity chapter 3 . 5/20/2012
I'm looking forward to more of this story. I like how you treat the characters and the plot is getting interesting.
| WhatTheCensoredXD chapter 3 . 5/17/2012
The ending really touched my heart. I had a large smile on my face since reading it was beautiful. Love the chapter :D!
| Casie01 chapter 3 . 5/17/2012
So glad to see an update to this story. I love the way Lucy refers to Doc and Rebecca as the the Chidren. I remember in Ernst Cobb Hauser telling her to she wanted kids and to go babysit great tie in to that scene. And the part when Ray see's Rebecca awake for the first time...awe that melted my heart! I can't wait for the next update!
| Lover of Reid chapter 2 . 4/30/2012
That was great. I'm glad that Rebecca woke up. I can definitely see Doc giving Hauser a piece of his mind when it comes to Rebecca's safety while in the hospital. I wonder how Lucy and Hauder will react when Doc and Rebecca call them? I can't wait til you update again.
| Henna Gamgee chapter 2 . 4/28/2012
Aww, I am loving this! The Doc/Rebecca interactions are so sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
| Lover of Reid chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
That was great. I love the interaction between Ray and Doc; how they have each other's backs emotionally through all of this. I can't believe that he is so willing to allow Doc to be so close to Rebecca since he was literally like a father for her through most of her life. I can't wait til you update.
| scottish99 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
I love it pleas keep writing more I'm dying to know what happens. Keep listening to the little voices they know what they are saying. :D xxxx
| Casie01 chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Great story! The way you wrote Doc's protectiveness of Rebecca is very true to his character. I can't wait to see what else you come up with.