Reviews for Pain of the Past
Guest chapter 26 . 2/27
What! Nooo don't stop it plsss more chapters
ILIKEPIE305 chapter 22 . 2/26
Wait, is Nero a boy or girl
ILIKEPIE305 chapter 6 . 2/26
Guest chapter 6 . 2/22
Sentences are confusing. Clearly you need to take the time to actually put the words that are needed to make said sentence.
NexNoche chapter 12 . 1/5
Not Chaos then maybe Erebus
NexNoche chapter 2 . 1/5
Son of chaos?
popcornrocks13 chapter 2 . 1/5
I am just a little confused about how Perseus is reading about those world wars when its supposed to be in the past before it happens. If this was an oversight will you please fix it? It is confusing the crap outa me
Mace Garzandu chapter 21 . 12/14/2016
This story is really good
Scipio Marcellus chapter 26 . 12/14/2016
Not finishing the book is kinda disrespectful to your fans and 've stuck with you from beginning to end.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/1/2016
Please fix spelling and grammar errors! Some sentences don't make any sense
A DemiWizard from District 13 chapter 26 . 11/25/2016
"there is this unwritten contract between author and reader and I think not ending your book kind of
violates that contract"

Guest chapter 2 . 11/8/2016
Woah woah woah woah, what year is this? The year 2500?
bana289 chapter 26 . 11/1/2016
Ughhh why the hell did you end the story plssss keep going I loveeed this storyy if u could see me right now I'll begg u 4 liiiiiiiiife! ️️️
Guest chapter 26 . 10/28/2016
Can you just keep updating on this please?
ChubLovesPigs chapter 8 . 9/3/2016
What's with the pendent
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