|Reviews for Pain of the Past|
| pertemisforever chapter 1 . 2/25
| D chapter 12 . 2/18
Is his dad Aeolus?!
| Danny Nightshade chapter 23 . 2/3
Yay they kissed but why did Perce say sorry to Arty at the end of the kiss and just WHY?!
| Danny Nightshade chapter 9 . 2/2
His is father Uranus
| Starter chapter 5 . 1/12
Although your story has an original plot, the greatness of it is; in my opinion; overwhelmed by the major confusion in the way your sentence are structured and written. My suggestion is for you to find a beta to help straighten out your story so it makes more sense.
| Kook chapter 24 . 12/31/2014
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/27/2014
Dood it's been a year! Where the updates been?!
| Dr I Lyne OBE chapter 6 . 12/2/2014
Sight is one of the senses.
Dr I Lyne OBE PhD
| Skymuse chapter 24 . 11/18/2014
YOU HAVENT POST FOR OVER A YEAR! PLEASE UPDATE IS AWESOME!
| jenralstupidity chapter 24 . 11/17/2014
| Silver19 chapter 24 . 11/7/2014
You havent updated dude its been like six months man also you should find a way for percy to come back to artemis after the fates finish their story alot of people like that
| PoseidonPrince chapter 24 . 11/2/2014
Still no new update huh? :P
| Shade Darkfire chapter 24 . 10/20/2014
Please keep writing
| tatortot367 chapter 24 . 9/9/2014
Please update soon
| Rockets521 chapter 2 . 9/1/2014
I really hate to be critical and/or a nit-picker, but isn't Percy's meeting with Artemis supposedly 2000 years ago? You had Percy read books about WW1 and 2... Sorry, I just had to point that out.
Other than that, I am really enjoying what I have read so far.