|Reviews for Get Yourself Back Home|
| mymanisfictional chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
I liked the mentions of counted time in each section and I thought your writing did a good job of expressing Arthur's anguish. My heart broke for him as I read and overall, it was just a wonderful story.
| BeautifulDesertFoxglove chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Oh my, that was so sweet and so sad. I loved it.
| Katherine A. Jones chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
This has such a cute ending! I'm with Arthur, though: Alfred being away from him is not a good thing. I really liked how you used the time at the beginning of each section.
| drown-ink chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
I was going to review a space but they told me that I can't post a empty review :c (but I typed a SPACE!) but that's okay, because for the sake USUK, I will now declare that I hate you. For making me cry you b*tch. I wished that I could punch you from the internet but realized I can't so now I'm typing away a flame instead. Get ready for the burn...and now I realized that this fic is posted in 2012 and you probably didn't check the reviews anymore. SO yeah. I can't flame whatever I want
| Calexy chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
brb while I go cry in a corner for a few hours
All righty. I'm back.
wHAT WERE YOU THINKING WHEN DECIDING TO WRITE THIS? WHY. WHY. WHY DID YOU BLOODY WRITE THIS. OH MY GOSH. I JUST- WHY. I HATE YOU. BUT THEN AGAIN I LOVE YOU FOR BEING ABLE TO WRITE SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFULLY HEART WRENCHING. URRRGGGGGG ASDFGHJKLSDFGHJKLSDFGHJKLSDFGHJKLDFGHJKLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
In all seriousness, this was a wonderful fan fiction. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you for writing this.
| doododoo chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
You actually succeeded in making me cry. Well done.
| Crozzack chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
It's a great story, really, you illustrate the worries and anguish perfectly. I can honestly sympathize with Arthur's feelings in this fic. Well, I heard that the US army is actually being considerate to the soldiers' families, but then again, government always hold secrets ;)
I love this story, and furthermore, the song 'ass back home' by Gym Class Heroes is actually one of my favourites :D
The ending is kind of hanging, and even though I like the last sentence from Arthur, ("Alfred... Just get yourself back home.") I believe that the event is kind of conflicting with the atmosphere you tried to create. Of course, it's just my opinion and I'm not good with literature :) however, I think that putting a scene where Alfred smiled, walked back towards Arthur and give him a hug instead of giving him a grin, will add the atmosphere.
Once again, this is just my opinion and I apologize if I offended you in some ways. :)
You are talented, keep up the good work, lad! ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
June 6th... Operation Overlord? D-day?
| TheHeroicAmerica chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
I love this story! But one of my favorite lines was "Goodbye, my children!" I can totally picture Alfred saying that to his cats.
| Lil Kitsune-chan chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
This was so cute! I'm glad to know that I'm not the only one who only liked the chorus in that song.
| Lovino Romano Vargas-Carriedo chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Uwah I nearly cried! X'3 This was beautiful!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
This... This is just. Too. Beautiful. I cried so hard. This was just so amazingly heartbreaking...
| lovelycomplications chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
This is so beautifully written. I would be lying if I said I didn't tear up. I had to leave my laptop for a few moments to just sulk.
Anyway, amazing job.
| Anne Fatalism Dilettante chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
I JUST DIED WALLOWING IN SADNESS BUT I AM ALIVE AGAIN.
THIS ON CHRISTMAS. THIS WHOLE COMING-HOME-FIC THAT I'M READING ON CHRISTMAS DAY!
OH, HOW YOU KILL ME.
And oh, that song. I know that one!
| yanoe chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Hey! ça faisait longtemps.
Encore une superbe histoire. Très touchante je dois dire.
Je vais bientôt commencer à lire ta Cardverse!USUK fic.
Je suis sûr que se sera génial. Alors ne l'arrête surtout pas.
Sur ce, bonne journée!