Reviews for Heir to the Crown
visitante16 chapter 4 . 3/4
seria interessante se vc fizesse uma continuação pra essa história de uma ideia q eu tive.
eu n tenho conta aqui e tb n sei escrever.
espero q então considere.
assim, pelo q foi dito aki, naruto tem o poder de ir contra kami,
além de jogar uma chave nos seus planos pois o destino não o governa,
tb ele é para trazer o CAOS ao seu mundo(kami).

ideia: sabemos q nessa história naruto é meio cinza, tanto proporções iguais entre sol e lua,
pela tua metáfora. sendo assim ele absorve o poder da kyuubi se livra dele, põe em outro lugar tb do "anjo"
dentro dele, ta p**** com o mundo dele vai ate os SUPERIORES e os põe pra baixo.
apartir daí ele será equilibrado, quero dizer não será mal pode recuperar um pouco do q era mas n idiota,
e recria tudo assumindo nome de caos.
lógico isso seria um crossover naruxpercy.
n seria ele se metendo em td, mas vm la n seria naruto sem um pouco de brincadeiras, uzumaki sem causar caos e namikaze sem uma onda dos dois.
n pus aki cm faria para se tornar isso mas ele poderia absrver o PODER dos kamis se tornando um e isso tb da muita nmargem de navegação.

ja to perdendo tempo aki. Mas escreva nessa base ai pd ser? se alguém ver esse comentário e decidir escrever em cima disso eu seria muito grato e pra eu saber gostaria q respondesse a esse comentário
pra eu ler e n sei cm funciona a política de plágio aki então falar c esse autor se n for ele.
e por favor ressurretion of the Forgotten continua a história!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/13/2013
A good story and I like the powers Naruto has demonstrated so far, although I think the Greed ability may be a bit overpowered. Looking forward to finding out the other three.
Veldrisk chapter 4 . 4/20/2013
Very interesting story so far. i like the abilities you have given to the different aspects so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter and seeing how Sakura continues to brow as a person and how her and Naruto's relationship continues to change.
Jamesk19 chapter 4 . 4/17/2013
looking forward to find out out more of crown of 7s abilities and weather naruto is immortal or something since he was passed on some power from what seems to an immortal
Jamesk19 chapter 3 . 4/17/2013
wow that is a pretty cool cliff hanger
Jamesk19 chapter 2 . 4/17/2013
2nd chapter was great to story is interesting so far
Jamesk19 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
wow interesting 1st chapter am looking forward to many more
Newbiegod35 chapter 4 . 4/14/2013
Nice Story update soon.
iampieman chapter 4 . 4/10/2013
that was hot at the end with Haku. and I thought it turned out all right.
Callmebaka chapter 2 . 4/9/2013
I hope minato got beaten into a bloody pulp by naruto. I mean, doesnt he deserves it? He can just take kyubi with him into shinigami stomach instead of MOTHERF*CKING seal it into his own son stomach! So yeah i think he deserve it thankyou, though its up to you what you want to do with kushina
mohahassan3 chapter 4 . 4/8/2013
this is great
sabery chapter 4 . 4/8/2013
so how it is in the harem
Gold Testament chapter 4 . 4/8/2013
You should have them join the village, but also have Haku try and become one of Naruto's precious people.
Soleneus chapter 4 . 4/8/2013
Looks to be shaping up pretty well, I can't wait to see how it turns out.
Quick question: Will Naruto ever warm up? There are hints of him doing so to Sakura, but will it be more? A cool Naruto is fine, but a frigid bastard makes a cold read.
Thorndsword chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
"That might have been my intention in the beginning, but things have changed. After all what kind of king would lower themselves to their level for something so petty as revenge." Naruto explained.

A king who expects to be taken seriously. Your story has failed the test.

- Thorndsword
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