yes it'd be nice if someone can actually INVESTIGATE HOW THE TROLL GOT IN versus brushing off the entire event like the asses they are

Well, seems the underground business is going well for Nio and his crew XD

Well, a marauder pretty much means a raider. So maybe something with thievery? If not, maybe The Chimeras (since they aren't pure Gryffindor), The Puppeteers, Kings of the Castle (cause lions are the "kings of the jungle" and their all in Gryffindor, but Hogwarts is a castle, not a jungle), the Jesters (doubtful, but self-explanatory), or the Griffins (cause griffins are part lion, part bird and it's sorta in the name: GRYFFINdor;). Hope this helps! I love your story, keep up the good work!

It's a shame that you've gotten such nasty reviews on your story. I'm personally loving the plot and it's one of my favorite stories so far. It's refreshing to see your take on different elements in the Harry Potter franchise.

please continue this story please

I started cackling like a hyena when you described the ‘modifications’ made to the obstacle course.

I’m absolutely loving this! And I love how Dumbledor is feeling secure in how Harry is being handled, when the boy in question hasn’t been Harry Potter in years.

Even though it's abandoned, at least you changed canon and didn't have Hermione crying in the bathroom and needing to be saved. Thanks for that!

I don't agree about having more trolls, though. If anything, Quirrel's efforts to get the stone should have changed, since there was no Harry Potter at the school for him to confront or go after. Then again, he was an idiot in canon and took a whole year to figure out how to get Dumblebumble out of the castle.

I thought Sirius left him his map. It said so in the will. The goblins wouldn't let any property be taken by someone else... which is odd, since Sirius never mentioned James' invisibility cloak or getting it back.

I just hope you change canon and don't follow the same stupid plot rails that other HP stories do. The whole point of having Harry raised differently is to fix things. Case in point, if you don't have him threaten, actually main, or kill Ron for picking on Hermione and almost getting her killed, I'm dropping this story.

Love this hope you can update soon

I absolutely love this story so much! I didn’t even realize how long it’s been since I’ve read a fic that’s been so enjoyable. Thank you so much for sharing this piece of genius with us. Hope you’re doing well! :)

I love this story. It is very unique and I hope you continue it someday.

It is an excellent and addictive read. I wonder why was it discontinued but I think the author has made many necessary improvements. I hope you can return to this project and finish this delightful rendition of all the joy JK Rowling has managed to take away.

What a terrific story to have stumbled across and I'm so very happy to have stayed up till 3 am to finish it. I do hope you return to it one day but regardless thank you so much for what you've gifted the world!

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