Reviews for Lucky's Arrival
hurricanes11 chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
I really enjoyed your piece! I like that you took the sad ending of "Marley and Me" and made it joyful by the bringing home of a new puppy! It made an incredibly sad time, somewhat happy. It was interesting how you left the end of it kind of hanging. You allowed the reader to use their imagination and come up with what they think Lucky was doing. My first thought was that he was using the bathroom in the house. Great job! :)
pokielove chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Awesome! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! COME ON ALIOSO! THAT IS REALLY GOOD! I HAVE TO FIND OUT WHAT LUCKY DID.
Sachi-Pyon chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
That was adorable Ali! Remember to click on settings in your profile so others without accounts can review the awesomeness...Write on amigo, its fantastic!
FireFlower56 chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Haha I can't wait to figure out what Lucky's doing! I have always wondered what happened when Lucky came home. This was short, so make the next one longer so I can read more of your awesomeness!