Reviews for Viola Lion
storycreater chapter 3 . 1/4/2014
All I could say is just, wow... The light hearted romance and their interactions with each other are pure perfection. As you can see, this is precisely my taste in romance and you managed to execute them so well.
Their first meeting, the concept of death and shinigamis...the babies and puppy. You seem to leave out a lot of symbolism and analogies that foreshadows the future of this story which I can already tell will by very memorable and dramatic. And you've also established a theme that will surely reflect on that.

I love that you kept their original personalities, making them more believable as kingdom hearts characters unlike some other recent stories so far. I can totally feel the chemistry between them. Usually when there're in-between scene that gets too long, I stop reading because i feel like i will only waste my time searching for rokunami moments and then next thing I know I'm done with the entire chapter without clenching my thirst for that specific moment I'm looking for. And happy to say this, but the fluffs in this story just comes one after another, keeping me entertained throughout the whole chapters. Yes, nonstop romance is just the medicine I need for my rokunami cravings.

I haven't had time to visit fan fiction myself but suddenly I'm feeling this massive craving for a romantic bittersweet story and then I thought fanfiction must have a bunch of them that published novels lack in my opinion. Sadly, I haven't been finding much that could bring this subtle emotion in my heart other than my top most favorite stories, but I've already read them. I needed something new. As you can see, I am a very picky girl and I only read and review those that could move this heavy stone called my heart. All I was craving the moment I woke up this morning is a pure Roxas and Namine fic without other bothersome side couples. And then I thought about you, Kiome, and your passion for this common otp of ours and your unique writing style, which you always fill with emotions. I remember your other story, "the way you remember me", which used to be called, "nobodies can feel passion too". I was extremely captivated by the depth of emotion between the characters Roxas and namine. I've always been attracted to stories that portray them as two youths struggling to be together against the cruel dark world, or any other factors that attempts to keep the apart, like death, status, or state of being a nobody viewed to lack any feelings.

If this will encourage you more to continue writing stories, then I will gladly say it: you, Kiome-yasha are one of the wonderful authors I've encountered since my first years in this website who have inspired me to make my own stories. Now believe me when I say that only few people are able to make it to this position in my head but you are one of them, so have more confidence in yourself and believe in your own capabilities. I could make this review longer but unfortunately, I'm only using my cell phone to type this down. So as I was saying, i know how it feels to lose your passion on writing over the years but find it as a motivation that there may be others whom you inspire as well.
chibibeanie chapter 3 . 11/29/2012
Namineeeeeeeeee... How are you siiiiiiiiick... TELL ME... (O-O)
meandmyfriend chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aah I love it xD I blushed and looked away from the screen when Roxas ran out of the shower hahahahaha can't wait for Chapter 4!

hey if you're running out of passion don't think about it...instead remember the reason why you started writing ;) and why you came this far just a word of advice
zelinkfan123 chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
Great :3 love this story :)
SorasPrincesss chapter 3 . 10/19/2012
i enjoyed it a lot so far ! i hope you keep updating this story kiome, it's so funny and cute !
silverrain1001 chapter 3 . 9/22/2012
Awwwwwwwwwww how adorable namine getting a puppy out of the blue.
S.S chapter 3 . 9/12/2012
Don't you quit you write some of the best RokuNami fanfics ever and I would be super sad if you quit.
chrome scale chapter 3 . 9/11/2012
Namine, has attachments for lambs, huh?
I actually searched what is the symbolism of that animal... And OH MAN ;_;

The animal undoubtedly suits Namine!

According to . /qx/symbolism_

"The lamb is a symbol of gentleness of character and patience under suffering. It signifies purity, meekness and sacrifice"


adfasfdgfghh! Oh man. I thought of Soren, Vennis and Aimee when that part when Roxas got fascinated with the babies. *Le cries in the corner*

Excellent chapter. I like the part where Roxas knocked off Namine naked. It reminds me a scene from Ryan Reynold's movie the Proposal. XD

I love Namine's attitude towards her physical condition. Positive and strong. :)

Anyway, looking forward to another chapter. I don't mind the wait.
Rosekun25 chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
AWWWW Roxas your so cute! Wondering if your "big enough" and I wonder whats wrong with Olette and what that news was OMG! Olette you gotta be okay! Naminé are you sick? Cause you can't be sick either! or I'll be sad! WHAT R THOSE PILLS FOR?!
Brid-Lopez chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
OMG! it is Naminé sick? D:! I want to know! :D and I'm exited! I like your writing sooo much! I loved you "The dairy of Naminé" and I obviously know that I'll love this one! hope to read more! n,n
Q-A the Authoress chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
Aww! Poor Nami all sad and lonely. :(

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Chibylove chapter 3 . 9/10/2012

I like Roxas POV, but I guess I have always like male POV casue they are so interesting! But the reason I like this one is different I think. I just love his brooding and that weird combination he has of naive with still having so much knowledge...And, pffft...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

T-The bathing part!HAHAHAHAHHA! I-I-I can't!BREATH!HAHAHAHA!
(Falls of the bed and roll around in the ground while laughing hysterically)

(10 minutes later)

S-Sorry, (giggles, then coughs to calm it down) but the idea of Roxas getting so anxious about taking his first shower(start to shake from pent up laughter) and when he notice his man parts...pffft!


(10 minutes more)

Ah! That was to much!(wipes tears from one eye) Okay, also I found Hayner(though I appreciate his brotherly concern) I hate it when he made Nami feel guilty for something she didn't do. It was his fault! That and his stupid bad tempered...(grumble, grumble)

Though he might have a good reason after seeing...well, that!(By the bye, lucky Namine!XDDD )

Still, big brother bully...XP

Roxas with makes me think of him with his and Namine's twins and little baby girl!X3

(Sigh) The good days...v-v
Maybe in the future...and as for the idea of a puppy Pluto(Roxas putting it on his jacket was CUTE!) Sound cool...though again that feeling of forthcoming...its not a good one and I know, its about...

Well, I won't say it, but...WHAT!? Now I have to wait two MOTHS!?
This is why I don't read UN-finish! This will keep me up at night for days...w;

Chibylove chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
Interesting! Though, Namine seems more cheerful then her usual character...I think, then again in KH2 she seem really cheerful when she was around Roxas.w

This chapter was sweet and it made me smile in some parts, kinda cozy...Geez, it made me even wish it was cold and I could snuggle under the blankets like Roxas(So cute!)

Heyner is now Namine's brother huh? Guess it makes sense since they are both blonds...wait Roxas is blond too, IT A FAMILY OF BLONDS!XDDD

Hmm, well lets see the old man flashback got me kinda jumpy...but I better not jump into conclusions yet.

So onward to the next chapter!
Chibylove chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
...I don't get it! This is a wonderful story, how can you say your out of it? Is this is how you write when your not 100% into it, I'm afraid to know when you are!O.O

This is sooo interesting, the detail, the show of emotion, the description and the plot itself got me wanting more and its only the first chapter! Thank goodness your gonna make more of this, if you didn't I would have gone ballistic!

And by the bye, what is wrong with lemons? Unless its really all about the sex(which that would only make it porn) which your stories are not, it makes the story even more exciting. That's my opinion, its like the kissing part in all the romance movies, the union of two souls threw the show of affection with their bodies is nothing to bad at all. In fact is my favorite part in the story so there!XP



You have the best taste in music ever!:D
GummyDrive chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
Yay! I was so happy when I saw your update. I was feeling drained and dead tired, but reading your story really put a smile on my face and made me feel a lot better. :D Keep on writing, Kiome-chan! A lot of us really love you and your story :"D
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