Reviews for War Hero Street Rat
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This story has the potential to become a great story. Apart from a few grammatical mistakes, this story is really good. How did Fred end up in the city, may I ask? Which city is it? Update soon, it's been three months now.

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FanSinceForever chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
I was so happy when i found out u updated this story because I thought u weren't going 2. I loved this chapter. Please update soon.
SofusGirl chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Amazing start you got here :)

It really caught my interest, and I hope you plan on continuing this and updating it soon, as it really can become an amazing fanfic if you keep it up ;)

The writing is good. There are a few minor gramatical mistakes, but nothing that really detracts from the story.

Keep up the good work

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FanSinceForever chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
omg I can't believe noone has reveiwed this story yet! please update