Reviews for The Precursian Kids: School Days year 1
Etoka442 chapter 19 . 10/9/2012
this was a great story! though might i suggest you put it on complete so people actually know?

Personally, though I liked the story, it didn't go too indept, and it was only durring when they were really young, and not too many exiting things happen. you should make one for when they're older. like at the age of 14 or 13.
SnowyDusk chapter 19 . 9/19/2012
You have to make a sequel I love the story too much for it to end.
evilanimegenious chapter 19 . 9/19/2012
amazing stuff. i really hope you keep writing fics. i enjoyed it all from start to finnish.
Ecofreakrsa17 chapter 19 . 9/18/2012
I love it perfect resolution for a perfect story. I really liked the ending with Jak and Lil it was like in TPL when Jak and daxter come home from misty island and Samos knows exactly what happened . I dont have a part I didn't like it was perfect. Take your time on the stories we'll just wait as patiently as long as you need us too.
evilanimegenious chapter 18 . 9/3/2012
NOOOOOO! WANTS MORE NOW! T-T
evilanimegenious chapter 14 . 9/3/2012
go you indeed. we have eco sages super eco gods and fairy-in-training and some precursors...is there ever a normal dull day in jaks life?...fuck no XD
evilanimegenious chapter 12 . 9/3/2012
when its all summarised like that (spoiler central - hasnt finnished jak 2, needs to finnish the last race of jak X) jak really did have a really crap teen life...poor guy
Foreteller of Three chapter 18 . 9/2/2012
This was a bit of a strange chapter yet interesting at the same time.
Now things along the plotline is getting a bit confusing but still good-ish
evilanimegenious chapter 6 . 9/2/2012
awww. shes so different to jak. hes head strong and cocky and shes calm and thoughtful...how they live together with her beeing a teen is gonna be fun XD
SnowyDusk chapter 18 . 8/30/2012
I knew Lilly was going to go crazy or something like that my friend now has to give me five bucks
Can't wait till next week
Zombie D-Man chapter 18 . 9/1/2012
sweet stuff love the story so far and hope to see more :)
Ecofreakrsa17 chapter 18 . 8/31/2012
I absolutely loved this chapter especially how Lilly went crazy with her dark form also I liked the Fred and George haveing the legolas and gimle point system I really had no bad parts about this chapter I loved it and I can't wait to read more :)
Ecofreakrsa17 chapter 17 . 8/23/2012
I like it I love how you made the other naughty dog games into movies and take your time on the updates I know that you'll make great chapters if we just wait patiently
Chimeran conduit chapter 16 . 8/16/2012
Another great chapter and my story is on an indefinite pause
Ecofreakrsa17 chapter 16 . 8/17/2012
I love it this chapter makes me want to read more I can feel the teen angst in this chapter kinda because I can relate to what Jamie's feeling but anyways great job I can't wait to read more update soon please
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