Great story

About the love of Kensi and Deeks:

Song of Songs 8:6-7

A relatively new translation, so it may be different from what you used to.

6 Set me as a seal upon thy heart, as a seal upon thine arm; for love is strong as death, jealousy is cruel as the grave; the flashes thereof are flashes of fire, a very flame of the LORD.

7 Many waters cannot quench love, neither can the floods drown it; if a man would give all the substance of his house for love, he would utterly be contemned. {S}

What does this remind us Jews of?

The V'ahavta of Shabbat prayer

You shall love the LORD your God with all your heart, with all your soul, and with all your might.
Take to heart these instructions with which I charge you this day.
Impress them upon your children.
Recite them when you stay at home and when you are away,
when you lie down and when you get up.
Bind them as a sign on your hand and let them serve as a symbol on your forehead;
inscribe them on the doorposts of your house and on your gates.

Thus you shall remember to observe all My commandments and to be holy to your God.
I am the LORD your God, who brought you out of the land of Egypt to be your God:
I am the LORD your God.

Song of Songs shows that even the most powerful human emotion or force is within the Torah. Not just marriage, not just having kids, but LOVEMAKING.

This is Kensi and Deeks. Some people are blessed to have this kind of Loving. Many ask 'why am I so lucky to have her/him?' I know I felt that way. To love like this is to feel a little bit more of the LORD in this world.

P.S.
Somehow, I just can't say Torah and F-.

Another great story. Love the mix of Hetty and Deeks. Very original

Brilliant! I enjoyed reading it so much!
Best regards from France.

AHH Lovely story x

Totally awesome!

Loved it to infinity and beyond I did! Oh so much. God, I love you, Woman! Could you just write 24/7 and never take a time out? Is that too much to ask? I am having this one tattooed on my eyelids inside so I can re-read it whenever I want.

Nice job here. I liked how they managed to basically save themselves, the team arriving just in time for clean up, because I'm sure Hetty would have saved Deeks if they hadn't gotten there in time. This was a nice look at the relationship between Hetty and Deeks. Thanks for sharing.

I loved the Star Wars part, that was a nice touch. I've noticed how you always seem to include bits from your earlier fics, I guess that means these all take place in the same general universe?

Just love this relationship between Hetty and Deeks.

Deeks' introspection in this chapter belied his growth as a person. From what he overcame to what he made of himself to who he is becoming, you make me believe he's real.

The physical therapy and Hetty's offers to help with his clothes cracked me up. Great humor in your writing as well as beauty.

The love making in this scene was beautiful and actually fill of LOVE. This was expertly written. No raunchiness was expressed in your descriptions, only passion and love. This is my favorite intimate scene I've ever read.

This is such a surprisingly intimate story. Regardless of the circumstances that brought Deeks to Hetty's house, this is a remarkable exploration of their relationship, his psyche, and her need to mother. I find this to be one of your most personal stories. It is a privilege to read such an intelligent version of what two people feel for each other. Exceptional writing as always, but I very much appreciate your delicacy in this tale.

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing it.

Oh pooh! I didn't want that to end! Now poor Deeks will have more convalescing to do...and based on how it went at Hetty's this time, I'm betting he'd rather do it at his place or even Kensi's! ;) I would love to read more of this if you are of the mind to continue.