Oh, wow, what a GREAT chapter! The simpleton idea is superb and so easy to imagine Deeks playing the role. Fantastic stuff and I can't wait to read more, but really soon, okay?

Pleaaaaaaaaaase!

Ta :()

sweet yet again.

keep up the good work

Loving this big time! So cool to see Hetty and Deeks working together. So cool to see Hetty discovering first-hand what Deeks has been bringing to the table as a member of the NCIS team. Cannot wait to read the chapter.

Deeks is awesome. That was so badass. A paperweight! And...just, oh, he's awesome.

I hope Callen gets there soon, cuz Deeks may be badass, but bringing just a knife to a fight where the odds are really not in his fucking favour...

Just don't seriously injure him?

good chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens. Update soon.

Man, "jimmy" is all kinds of awesome! I really loved how quickly he came up with an alias. he's very smart and a quick thinker :)

Keep it up! Please udpate soon!

So thrilling and scary. Deeks is a genius at being undercover. I hope the team can save the day. Go Deeks for bashing one of the thugs.

First of all... THANK YOU for having Deeks call Callen! I'm so glad that he hasn't just gone all Jason Bourne with a busted knee. I have an extremely hard time believing any cop or Federal Agent for that mtter... There are actually rules that state an officer has to carry a weapon at all times, an officer has his "department issed" weapon, and a personal weapon he must keep on him when he's off duty. At least that's how it is in NY according to my Uncle the Chief of Deer Park Fire department.

Hetty should have more compassion for Pavel. I really hope he has a shot at redemption.

Fabulous chapter even without Deeks! Lol!

Just saw the extended trailer with Renko. Lot of shooting going on.

Oh my! Poor Hetty! Come on Deeks, where are you man?

Surely Deeks is going to come to the rescue. He's just gotta!

Another great chapter, even if you do have me on the edge of my seat :)

No worries Hetty, he'll be fine. Right? I really liked Hetty's thoguths at the end, you really dug deep into their relationship for this story, and it turned out great!

keep up the good work!

Really? That cliff hanger just happened? Update soon!

Hmmm, methinks Hetty is in a little bit of trouble. It's a good thing she has Deeks there for back up. I'm really enjoying this stroy. Keep it up :)

R.W.

The last paragraph is so heartbreakingly beautiful, I'm all teary eyed and incredibly nervous over what happens next! I eagerly await the next update!

Wonderful chapter! The paperweight bit made me laugh! Deeks being all worried about the Duchess of Deception was endearing, and the mental image of Deeks with a cane was quite dashing indeed! Curious about Hetty's meeting, great job!