That was weird, but totally hilarious. I love Saki, he's a pretty wicked sweet character XD Keep up the good work! UPdate sooN!

I really loved the introspection on Deeks here. So,e of his past is still murky and you filled it in with believability and such insightful thought about his behavior and how it could shape him into the man we know. Just very nicely done and with a great and subtle touch. It's also just nice to think of Deeks finally realizing he has people to count on, people he trusts, and people that care about him.

That really made me smile, to have Hetty give Deeks permission to have a girl over! I actually think that highlights even more the unique relationship they have. It's something closer than co-workers and it's really rather sweet and somewhat hesitant on their parts. And the insights into Hetty's past are so detailed and interesting and make me want to know more. And since I'm playing catch up, I have another chapter right away to read!

This was the best chapter yet! So much to love here. Deeks thinking about Kensi, how Callen saved him, talking movies with Hetty. Great stuff!

Did you see the picture of Hetty in the morgue ? What do you think of that? Scary! If that's Deeks she is devistated!

LOL! I would sooooo love to see this - and all your other - stories on the tv in episodes, but, until then I'm gonna have to do with the very visual tale in my minds eye. Brilliant :)

I love introspective Deeks. his life is going really well. He has some great people in his life.

Okay this was very well written like usual but it isn't my favorite. The PT well... I honestly don't know if you've dealt with that yourself so, I probably shouldn't comment on it. As for the rest, it felt a lot like a summery of the previous chapter. I look forward getting back to the collections and what they reveal.

Oh this was great! Loved it!

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Smashing chapter. A little bit of everything and that makes it perfect. :)

sweet as

A wonderful chapter with great insight on both sides. Great job, as always :)

very good chapter.

Hetty is so awesome. And Deeks and Kensi are electrifying together. They are uber sexy and hot.

Another great chapter! I love the interaction between Hetty and Deeks.

Oh, Hetty...you know your agents too well XD

That was funny in a way i didn't think it could be, you did a great job with it. Personally, I loved the scene about Hetty's mother, that was very nicely done. keep up the good work! Keep it up!