Reviews for Unshaken by the Darkness, Book One: The Teyrn's Lovely Daughter
Commander Tasun chapter 80 . 7/21
Note, Your years start losing track later in the story.

Also, I hate failed romances. Hated Gavin too.
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TitaniumFire chapter 1 . 4/6
This series is THE BEST I have ever read. I love how deep you get into each person's thoughts and the amount of details you give. THIS IS THE BEST!
Justfilwt chapter 67 . 9/2/2014
I can't believe it. You totally killed me. Stabbed me in the heart with your words. First review I'm ever writing, and I'm crying over my keyboard typing this. You made a total mess of my feelings.
Thank you for writing this fantastic story that made me smile so many times, and that made me cry just as many - from feeling so much for the characters. (I get the feeling you are an awesome mum..)
Now if you will excuse me, I have to find myself a pack of tissues and chapter 68 is waiting for me.
Love,
Justy
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 6/24/2014
while i get that loghain sees Rhi as a surrogate daughter, the hints that she see's him as her model of handsomeness is rather disturbing, i like the werewolf mini plot though
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 6/24/2014
it seems like bryce had plans for his pup to be something other then a warrior maiden, i wonder what the orlesians will make of her now?
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 6/24/2014
if she's being trained by loghain it wont be long before she starts wearing full plate and carrying a shield bigger then she is,

its clearly howe thats behind this, he seems to have taken an intense disliking of her and is just the sort to frame habren
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 6/24/2014
good to see that Rhi made it through the worst, i somehow doubt that howe will survive loghains vengeance if he sacks highever
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 6/24/2014
when you child is sick child it is far scarier then any tainted beat
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 6/24/2014
disease doesnt care about your social class, but surely the chantry could spare a healer of wynne's caliber in exchange for political support from the couslands
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 6/24/2014
this chapter almost brought me to tears, and is incredible characterisation
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 6/24/2014
death is too good for habren, although it might also be howe's doing
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 6/24/2014
i wouldent be surprised if the rat wasnt flemeth working in mysterious ways, but magic would certainly make things delightfully convoluted
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 6/24/2014
poor kitty...
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 6/24/2014
i wonder what bryce is up to in the marriage game, fergus marries a forigner and it seems like he has big plans for rhi, how old is seamus dumar? kirkwall is a great alliance for the coastal highever
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 6/24/2014
it might be nice for you to include more translations for those of us who cant speak french, i do like celene though, it will be cool to see her in DA3
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