|Reviews for Unshaken by the Darkness, Book One: The Teyrn's Lovely Daughter|
| Commander Tasun chapter 80 . 7/21
Note, Your years start losing track later in the story.
Also, I hate failed romances. Hated Gavin too.
| TitaniumFire chapter 1 . 4/6
This series is THE BEST I have ever read. I love how deep you get into each person's thoughts and the amount of details you give. THIS IS THE BEST!
| Justfilwt chapter 67 . 9/2/2014
I can't believe it. You totally killed me. Stabbed me in the heart with your words. First review I'm ever writing, and I'm crying over my keyboard typing this. You made a total mess of my feelings.
Thank you for writing this fantastic story that made me smile so many times, and that made me cry just as many - from feeling so much for the characters. (I get the feeling you are an awesome mum..)
Now if you will excuse me, I have to find myself a pack of tissues and chapter 68 is waiting for me.
| thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 6/24/2014
while i get that loghain sees Rhi as a surrogate daughter, the hints that she see's him as her model of handsomeness is rather disturbing, i like the werewolf mini plot though
| thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 6/24/2014
it seems like bryce had plans for his pup to be something other then a warrior maiden, i wonder what the orlesians will make of her now?
| thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 6/24/2014
if she's being trained by loghain it wont be long before she starts wearing full plate and carrying a shield bigger then she is,
its clearly howe thats behind this, he seems to have taken an intense disliking of her and is just the sort to frame habren
| thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 6/24/2014
good to see that Rhi made it through the worst, i somehow doubt that howe will survive loghains vengeance if he sacks highever
| thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 6/24/2014
when you child is sick child it is far scarier then any tainted beat
| thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 6/24/2014
disease doesnt care about your social class, but surely the chantry could spare a healer of wynne's caliber in exchange for political support from the couslands
| thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 6/24/2014
this chapter almost brought me to tears, and is incredible characterisation
| thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 6/24/2014
death is too good for habren, although it might also be howe's doing
| thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 6/24/2014
i wouldent be surprised if the rat wasnt flemeth working in mysterious ways, but magic would certainly make things delightfully convoluted
| thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 6/24/2014
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 6/24/2014
i wonder what bryce is up to in the marriage game, fergus marries a forigner and it seems like he has big plans for rhi, how old is seamus dumar? kirkwall is a great alliance for the coastal highever
| thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 6/24/2014
it might be nice for you to include more translations for those of us who cant speak french, i do like celene though, it will be cool to see her in DA3