Reviews for Invisible
Guest chapter 18 . 2/2
Please update this story!
It is amazing!
Guest chapter 18 . 12/10/2013
CONTINUE! :D
Guest chapter 18 . 11/16/2013
OMG update please I NEED Karlos sex like now! Watermelon flavored lube?! Hot!
Guest chapter 14 . 11/14/2013
Omg! You're amazing! This story is like whoa, no words, bravo!
EliJace chapter 18 . 9/18/2013
This is amazing. You're a very talented writer. Please, update? PLEASE (:
mrs.hutcherlark chapter 18 . 9/15/2013
ALL OF YOUR STORIES MAKE ME NOT DO MY HOMEWORK! I've spent my whole weekend reading most of your stories and I have gotten no homework done. Your stories are addicting. Okay, I can't wait to see what's next! :)
thearbiter35 chapter 18 . 9/9/2013
i was smiling at how cute the first half of the chapter was and couldn't stop laughing during the second. one of the best chapters i've read in a while
itsallguchicauseyolo chapter 18 . 8/31/2013
OMKENLOS THE ENDING KILLED
ME! I CANT STOP
LAUGHING! IM
SOO GONNA DO THT TO
MY KIDS!
-Red
Vezulow chapter 18 . 8/30/2013
i loved it.
annabellex2 chapter 18 . 8/30/2013
Glad everything is working out for Kenlos, hopefully it will continue! ; )
EuthoxiaPena12 chapter 18 . 8/30/2013
I love it! I would like to see some smut! Can you please make Kendall top? But Carlos not to be so happy about this,but in the end he'll sure like it!
BTRLoganLover77 chapter 18 . 8/29/2013
Ok I officially love this story I read all 18 chapters in one sitting! Please update soon! I'm hooked!
krafty writer chapter 18 . 8/29/2013
i kinda expected the ending but it was still pretty good
winterschild11 chapter 18 . 8/29/2013
HAHAHAHAHA, Carlos' dad is hysterical! Loved the song sequence
The Senate chapter 18 . 8/29/2013
This chapter was so funny and romantic! Yes pls do another story b/c you are an excellent writer
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