|Reviews for Double Demon|
| TheGrammarNaziIsHere chapter 15 . 11/23/2013
love the way they joined the crew its going to be an amazing sequel
| Jade Vargas chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Well. Good start. But people sweat drop during every other sentence. *sweat drops*
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/23/2013
yes more i said more do you hear me i said more
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/22/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
| The Prophet Of Lies chapter 5 . 8/25/2012
... i can't deal i loved first 2 chaps then shit seems to have hit the fan to pure jokes
| the.D.Pirates chapter 13 . 8/18/2012
awesome battle! keep on writing, cuz i like the story from the beginning! Btw you can try including the strawhat pirates join the battle using their new awesome powers(awesome black rope dragon twister by zoro can help spice up the susanoo)
| BlackFoxoftheMoon chapter 13 . 8/13/2012
Love it! I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!
| BlackFoxoftheMoon chapter 12 . 8/12/2012
Great chapter! Love the story please continue As Soon As Possible! :)
| crazyrubsoff chapter 10 . 6/28/2012
wow, something i can actually read. i haven't had any of that lately. maybe some interaction between strawhats and newcomers will give you somewhere to go. plot building fluff
(like mortar between bricks)
| crazyrubsoff chapter 9 . 6/15/2012
is this after the one piece timeskip cause if so then Luffy could teach Shikamaru about Haki... me again. if you are wondering i AM actually a she, a very crazy one, but i don't mind being mixed up. I mean hey, i cut my hair off for a reason!
| crazyrubsoff chapter 8 . 6/6/2012
i agree with the shikamaru idea, they NEED brains
| crazyrubsoff chapter 7 . 6/3/2012
great idea bringing someone else in maybe something along the lines of (Sakura Haruno, Kakashi hatake, you will join Naruto on his quest. -Granny Tsunade) note: quotation marks cause my browser to crash, otherwise I would use them. . .
| crazyrubsoff chapter 5 . 5/19/2012
i wanna see naruto and luffy in the wateeeeeeeeerrrr. . .
| darkmatter13 chapter 5 . 5/18/2012
you know, alot of guys I met actually liked justin beiber when we heard the music... we thought, "wow, she's good"... we pretty much only disliked it when we learned he was actually a boy... so most guys that heard him without seeing the video and knowing he's a boy liked the music, it was after that he was hated... sounds too much like a woman tho, don't he...