Reviews for Double Demon |
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![]() ![]() Minamina Shimawaaaaaa Atakai Paina-Puru-Puru Atama-Boka-Boka Aho Bakaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the way they joined the crew its going to be an amazing sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. Good start. But people sweat drop during every other sentence. *sweat drops* |
![]() ![]() yes more i said more do you hear me i said more |
![]() ![]() _ cool |
![]() ![]() fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... i can't deal i loved first 2 chaps then shit seems to have hit the fan to pure jokes |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome battle! keep on writing, cuz i like the story from the beginning! Btw you can try including the strawhat pirates join the battle using their new awesome powers(awesome black rope dragon twister by zoro can help spice up the susanoo) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Love the story please continue As Soon As Possible! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, something i can actually read. i haven't had any of that lately. maybe some interaction between strawhats and newcomers will give you somewhere to go. plot building fluff (like mortar between bricks) |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this after the one piece timeskip cause if so then Luffy could teach Shikamaru about Haki... me again. if you are wondering i AM actually a she, a very crazy one, but i don't mind being mixed up. I mean hey, i cut my hair off for a reason! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i agree with the shikamaru idea, they NEED brains |
![]() ![]() ![]() great idea bringing someone else in maybe something along the lines of (Sakura Haruno, Kakashi hatake, you will join Naruto on his quest. -Granny Tsunade) note: quotation marks cause my browser to crash, otherwise I would use them. . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wanna see naruto and luffy in the wateeeeeeeeerrrr. . . |