Reviews for Ariana
Will chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Wow, this is pretty good. You show what might have been going through Ariana's mind pretty well and I really get a sense for her point of view and how she might have been feeling.

If you are interested in further writing, I belong to this really great Harry Potter roleplaying site. The address is

www . chess-magic . com (without the spaces).

We'd love to have you but good luck with your writing either way.