Reviews for Myopia
RS11 chapter 21 . 12/25/2017
Better than the s4 finale.
Carnival14 chapter 21 . 5/20/2017
The very last sentence sent me into a fit of evil laughter. For some reason my parents are giving me scared looks.
lilyblaney chapter 21 . 5/16/2017
Definitely one of the best Sherlock fanfics I've read. Gosh I love this. Sally and Sherlock's friendship of sorts at the end is a masterpiece. I actually like Sally now. I mean, who knew she could be so awesome?! And the whole glasses and contacts thing was brilliant. Anyway, lovely writing, and thanks for writing!
BookWarrior23 chapter 2 . 6/22/2016
This is so interesting! I'm glad you didn't make this cliche; you definitely caught my attention and I'm excited for the next chapter.
Hidden.Forever chapter 8 . 2/26/2016
Hello, I just want to make a friendly observation here. As someone who's also having a hard time ironing out all the plot holes out of a chapter, I just noticed something. Maybe Sherlock didn't hear the claxon, but he would have seen Donovan reacting to the loud sound (namely, closing her eyes to "shut the sound off"), unless he was looking at the target and missed it, in which case, mea culpa. Imagine the "loud sound" in your head and you'll see what I mean. Therefore, the last part of this chapter feels a bit off mark.

Still liking this to bit though! There are very few fics that pull off "mind games" like you did, I think Coletta comes to mind and that's about it.
Hidden.Forever chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
Man, that last phrase sent me into a pique of laughter!
FU chapter 16 . 7/22/2015
librarywitch chapter 21 . 7/2/2015
That was perfect and exactly what the little monster needed to happen to him. In my neck of the woods, family is the last thing you screw with. Fantastic tale.
librarywitch chapter 5 . 7/2/2015
Neat touch.
librarywitch chapter 4 . 7/2/2015
She is right. He was passing them whether they were wrong or not. Tom Baker was the fourth doctor, the sixth doctor was Sylvester McCoy. Still well done.
CalicoCat chapter 21 . 5/6/2015
*sigh of content* this fanfic was really good. AS in AWESOME, I really liked the last two chapters, i really ship johnlock and I thought that it was awesome that Sally and Sherlock finally get along... I've been spending too much time on this fanfic and I didn't study at all for my Mandarin test...guess waht- I regret nothing. This was totally worth it. WHOO YEA! ps I 3 your styleof writing and the very last chapter was just... magical. *picturing mycroft slamming his umbrella on Morairty's kneewcap repeatedly* hahaha. Purfect. ;)
I heart the Hitachiin twins chapter 4 . 2/5/2015
This is AWESOME! Is this like Saw? One of the only horror movies I can stand... Are there any more Sherlock fics like this? I wouldn't be surprised if the answer was no, how original. If there are can you please tell me!
The Jumble Book chapter 21 . 7/16/2014
Really enjoyed this fic and watching the character development if both Sherlock and Sally. Very Saw funhouse-esque! Great read.
Nerdlee chapter 21 . 2/3/2014
This is, quite possibly, the most sick and beautiful thing I have ever read. DO you know how rare it is for writing to elicit a physical response? I have flinched, sucked in a gasp, had to look away from the screen, had to get up and walk around the room, and have been entirely mesmerized. Your mind is scary sharp and twisty as literal hell. I am amazed by your nuance and your violence and by how much absolute joy I have found in it. I am off to devour any other creations from your devious palace. Thank you so much for something worth reading.
IAlwaysKeepShipping chapter 21 . 1/9/2014
It was interesting to read how Sally's opinion of Sherlock changed and ow they played together :-) Amazing story, thank you for writing it
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