Reviews for Night Flight
BlackRose9241997 chapter 30 . 9/25/2017
Your story flows so well. Please update soon.
LadySandy chapter 30 . 7/18/2017
If you want me too, I will beta. English is my first language after all
kagomya chapter 1 . 5/16/2017
i am so horribly behind but please update sometime soon its been forever... at the very least can we get a somewhat okay ending?
hotcat chapter 30 . 4/9/2017
Pls update
Mirage chapter 30 . 2/23/2017
i unerstand why his Magic reacted like this, and i think it will also Keep him from Feeling to sorry, it was simple selfdefence after so many flashing warrnings for this People,...and he did Keep this Young man alive...he knows who where good and who bad..., they should know how Subs are, how they will react in defence when they are corrnered...and all of them could have backed down after the first leep to freedom and more than clear warnings...i mean it was like big signs with flashing neon lights..., they could have set him free!...or given him his friends...
...who i dont think they had at all !

...friends who i think where not killed...
...i mean it Looks more like Illusion to me, they never did give him a sign that they where real, he never talked with them, asked them...
so they could be caught up in work or at home and dont even know that Harry was tricked with them!

he will learn from this, he will learn to trust other to go to them for help, he will never do the same misake again...first looking if things are true, then asking for help and backup and making a plan and then act...

hope draco and blaise are fast with him and severus in the Tower,... as i dont want blaise mom kicked to the next week when she trys something stupid...the two Young men are on the right way with there courting,...maybe they can take a time out and go traveling with Harry,...maybe Tropical Island or small island Resort
all will go well with a bit time...and after the first kiss there it can only go up fast to a mating

please write soon more chapters soon, cant wait to read more
Mirage chapter 24 . 2/22/2017
im not sure...i dont see Harry as war hero...he only had luck and People working hard to Keep him alive... so ist not fully right in the end f ch24...
he never really does think bevor doing something...follows orders without thinking much... i mean even him being together for a short time bevor the war with ginerva was because every one suggested this...
auror moody was a war hero, tonks too...many other...but he and his Frieds where only children playing war and being at the wrong places all the time doing often stupid things without asking other People first.

when he would have gone to blaise and draco they could have worked something out,...even in the Moment where they did see this uncle ...he could have told the aurors...but no, he acts blind and like a stupid fool...throwing himsef in the arms of tthe foe without a backup plan... more than ready to say he deserves to be forced to mate...
he really should learn to use his Little useless brain...bevor its fully to late.
MaggieM chapter 30 . 2/11/2017
I've very much enjoyed this story thus far and eagerly await more!
Mew Mew White Tiger chapter 30 . 2/9/2017
I just finished reading this, and I find it ironic that your last update was a year ago today and that is the day I complete the story. I hope you will someday continue this story as it is one of the best and most descriptive stories I have ever read. I do hope you are in good help and will someday continue this story. Stay wonderful 3
angel1412 chapter 30 . 2/3/2017
I really hope you finish this story! its really great!
duplicitous.serendipity chapter 8 . 12/24/2016
Hahaha thanks to your authors note at the beginning of this chapter I of course, had to find said snail video myself which placed me in the weird part of YouTube. It took about two hours to get out. :)
R chapter 30 . 12/16/2016
Sky dancer of the Moon chapter 30 . 12/9/2016
I like this story so far.
Poor Harry, Draco and Blaise.
I hope Harry will wake up soon.
Please update soon.
Your English is good hon.
leylinjan chapter 30 . 12/8/2016
wow... wonder if Amalyne will rethink her advice once she learns what the Last attempt to force Harry to mate brought... or whether she'll just think their attempt has to be more sophisticated.

Love this story.
leylinjan chapter 11 . 12/8/2016
"Maybe the two of them aspired to more than a convenience marriage after all."
- correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think Harry even knows that they're engaged yet - he didn't know whether they were together in the hospital, and they never talked to him about their relationship in detail... :)

still, it is a small detail, so it doesn't really matter that much, I guess.

I really like this story.
LanaDuchessna chapter 30 . 11/26/2016
This is an amazing story. Your descriptions of transformations and attention to detail of the characters and what is happening to them is very well done. I see you haven't posted since Feburary. Any new on if you will be continuing this story?
Also, Harry Potter fan fiction aside, I think you have potential as a fantasy writer. Had this story been about 3 men caught in within their creature inheritance could have been very strong. Keep writing and see where it takes you.
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