Reviews for The Ice King's daughter
A experienced re chapter 6 . 7/11/2015
It was a good story until the last chapter, you can't just kill off IK and Finn, I gave it a 5/10
Guest chapter 6 . 6/26/2015
After reading the entire story through and through, I can say that fanfictions are still terrible. When I saw this, I had hope that it would be reasonably good. I was mistaken. Knowing Finns charecter he wouldn't be the one to ever forgive the Ice King nor have sexual intercourse with his offspring. And on the subject of Ice King, I hardly believed that he could have a daughter. If you had watched the episodes when he was Simon, you would see that he had no wife and the closest he has to a daughter was Marciline. I give this a 4/10 and NOT recomend unless you like pornographic story's that don't match up with the charecters and their development.
fanggrin chapter 2 . 6/1/2014
Looks down after slapping self repeatedly me and my smut please keep it coming loving your hard work a new fan
Darren The Madman and Insanity chapter 6 . 4/17/2014
Guest chapter 5 . 4/12/2014
Been a long time since the last update. Still a good story though.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/28/2014
The first one I've read that hasn't just been for the sex I love the story and I'd love to read more I can't wait for the next chapter - Jakob with love
anal chapter 2 . 2/27/2014
large faggot
Guest chapter 4 . 11/4/2013
Please make more chapters. I wanna see Finn's reaction to FP being there.
Vashawn chapter 4 . 10/20/2013
all i have to dat is wow... just wow
Guest chapter 4 . 10/3/2013
This is creepy no offence
Umm nice start with the love but took it to far with the making out bit
notalivezombie chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
well now this took an interesting turn.
anonymous chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
Great story keep writing
Guest chapter 4 . 9/9/2013
Ummm that was unexpected, but ood that fp got in on it. ;)
afroninja43 chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
Man ive been waiting for ever for this update i always like your stories and now that you have added fp please im begging you update soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
Can you please finish this story?
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